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Brought the Sun

~ I walked out this morning and looked to the sky Found nothing but dark clouds meandering by The stars were all hidden no moon I could see And doubted the sunrise would come and find me When then I did notice so bright on the screen A good morning wish on this dawn so serene I put on a smile and went on my way For two simple words brought the sun on this day ~

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/4/2019 12:05:00 PM

Wow seems I have missed quite a bit of beauty lately! Forgive my lateness things aren't too good at the moment! I M so sorry!;(

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/3/2019 5:28:00 PM

And a Good Morning, a Great Morning, to you, O Poet! Smiles, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 10/4/2019 7:57:00 AM

Thank you my friend. And a wonderful morning to you as well.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/3/2019 4:21:00 PM

Here comes the sun :).I'm sure the sun will always find you Chris..Yes Thanks God Dark clouds never last forever.

Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 4:34:00 PM

Thank you Charmaine. Sometimes they last a little longer then we hope for but eventually they go away.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/3/2019 12:29:00 PM

Very uplifting, Chris. A couple of words sometimes are enough! Janice

Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 1:03:00 PM

Thank you Janice. I am thrilled you enjoyed this morning poem.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/3/2019 11:57:00 AM

I can appreciate how poetry cheers and comments can make your day Chris! I loved reading this sweet poem this morning. It is early for me because of the difference in Hawaiian time. I found inspiration in your lovely words. xxoo

Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 12:26:00 PM

Then you read it at the perfect time my friend. : ) Thank you Connie. Aloha. : ) I appreciate your kindness always

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/3/2019 11:31:00 AM

Swing my friend...A good day to you...

Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 11:45:00 AM

Thank you Arturo for your nice words. Good day to you.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/3/2019 11:19:00 AM

How do you do this so brilliantly and smoothly time after talented time? You blow my wee mind in the best possible way, Chris; endless poetry explosions that thrill me. Poetry hugs and appreciation ... CayCay

Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 11:45:00 AM

Thank you CayCay. I guess it is because I have wonderful poets like you who stop by and read and leave such nice comments.

Hello There

Date: 10/3/2019 10:54:00 AM

So glad it was a quick overturn, my friend :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 11:00:00 AM

Thank you my friend. I am happy you liked this and stopped by this morning. It means another smile for me. : )

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/3/2019 9:14:00 AM

This is another beauty. I loved it... You're a really great poet. Prayers

Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 9:30:00 AM

Thank you again and again Regina. I appreciate your visits always.

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/3/2019 9:03:00 AM

Sounds like your sky resembles mine, minus the rain we have here, glad you found some sunshine in a good morning greeting...always nice when a friend can brighten a day...Beautiful penning my friend :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 9:30:00 AM

Thanks you so very much Sandy. It sure is. Even the dreariest day came be made invisible by a smile.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/3/2019 7:46:00 AM

I like this Chris.... Panagiota

Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 7:52:00 AM

Thanks my friend. Sorry about your A's. I guess now I will move over to the Astros. I do live in Texas. : )

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/3/2019 7:40:00 AM

It is gray skies here too Chris. It sounds like you got a nice good morning wish to brighten your day! Enjoy :)

Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 7:52:00 AM

Thank you so very much Heidi. I did, it was this comment from you. : )