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Toes engulfed by sand and pebbles, gentle flow, Area of sand sloping down to the water of the sea, Relinquish all the fear and pour excitement into their eyes, Oh wonderous water, plunge them inside their glory, Teach them to find a disposition of providing amusement, As they toss tiny rocks into the great open tide, Into nothingness with superior improvement, While the innocent pureness of two brothers collide. May I hear the chuckles of those handsome boys, Ringing and playing and singing and dancing, All the chimes of playful giggles in high spirits, Ring around the rosie while time keeps passing. Throw out the plastic toys or save them in the attic, Lets keep the animated memories alive in spirit, Go and search for the immersed sea of innocence, Watch the brothers prance to their favorite lyrics. Written By: Laura Urbaniak November 2, 2015 Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 11/18/2015 4:12:00 PM
Thank you so very much for composing and submitting a poem in my contest, Laura, I love your write congratulations on your win!!! My husband and I truly enjoyed the poem. Hugs dear friend Eve
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Date: 11/18/2015 8:28:00 AM
Well expressed! Congrats.
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Date: 11/18/2015 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Richard :) Be blessed -LU xxx *smiles*
Date: 11/18/2015 4:36:00 AM
You have done well with this,congrats on the win Laura...hugs
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Date: 11/18/2015 9:18:00 AM
Thank you very much for your kind words:) *smiles* -LUxxx
Date: 11/17/2015 9:58:00 PM
Laura, Congratulations, Have a nice day. SKAT
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Date: 11/18/2015 9:17:00 AM
Thank you SKAT, you have a nice day also :)
Date: 11/17/2015 6:59:00 PM
Congratulations Laura
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Date: 11/17/2015 7:15:00 PM
Thank you Nayda :) -LU xxx *smiles*
Date: 11/17/2015 6:43:00 PM
many congrats on your win Laura sorry i missed reading this charming poem earlier:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/17/2015 7:14:00 PM
Thank you Jan :) Your kind words are appreciated -LU
Date: 11/17/2015 6:08:00 PM
A lovely descriptive poem that is very faithful to the visual chosen. Love especially the final stanza. Congratulations on a most lovely win, Laura! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 11/17/2015 7:14:00 PM
Thank you Paul :) You are so sweet!! -LU xxx *smiles*

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