Andrea Dietrich Poet Limerick

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Brother Told Us

Brother told us sometimes that he peed
sitting down with a good book to read,
but with his ding-a-ling
he was having a fling
when we spied on him.  Good book indeed!


Written 5/20/14 for Roy Jerden's Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy Limerick Contest

By the way, from comments I am getting, I need to let everyone know this is simply a fabrication. My brother told us nothing, and we never spied on him. And our small bathroom shared by ten people would not have suited this purpose! hahaha

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Debbie Duncan June 18, 2017 at 8:49 PM This is so cute. I know what you mean about explaining your poems. Congrats on the win :)

Maurice Yvonne October 5, 2014 at 4:36 PM Belated Congratulations but you are so naughty. If you are around, I rewrote my latest poem wich is POD. I think it was probably better before the rewrite but I would like to get your feedback.

Poet Destroyer A June 14, 2014 at 12:04 AM Andrea, :)Congratulations on your win. "Linda"

Sara Kendrick June 9, 2014 at 6:04 PM I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara

Elaine George June 9, 2014 at 1:07 PM lol!!!! so funny, Andrea. LaINIE

Shadow Hamilton June 9, 2014 at 7:25 AM wonderfully funny Andrea love it congrats on win hugs

Mohan Chutani June 9, 2014 at 12:30 AM Andrea, another bawdy naughty one. Liked it. Mohan

Richard Lamoureux June 8, 2014 at 8:26 AM At that age if he was in the bathroom for a long time he was definately reading a book. A couple of minutes several times a day would be ding a ling time. Congratulations Andrea.

Skat A June 8, 2014 at 7:31 AM Andrea, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~

Dr. Upma A. Sharma June 8, 2014 at 4:34 AM Quite a humour in this one Andrea ! Congrats on merited win !

Dr.Ram Mehta June 7, 2014 at 9:47 PM Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, Andrea

John Lawless June 7, 2014 at 9:05 PM Some secrets are not meant to be shared, and keyholes peeked through. Perhaps the book was his cover. I like this one Andrea.

Debbie Guzzi June 7, 2014 at 8:01 PM LOL [There once was a man who took showers/he washed from hour to hour/ though very clean/he diddled unseen/his prominence rising to tower!] Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Casarah Nance June 7, 2014 at 7:15 PM LOL oh my goodness, you are silly. what a witty poem, grats on second place :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 7, 2014 at 5:22 PM LOL!!!!! the ding a ling! :D hilarious witty one!!!! CONGRATULATIONS Andrea.. :D God bless you.. :)

Jack Horne May 29, 2014 at 2:36 PM LMAO - I'm still chuckling as I'm writing this. I bet your brother will be glad of the footnote!!!! Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2014 at 5:51 PM no worry, Jack, my brother would be as likely to be found at this poetry site or ANY site as he would be likely to be found in our old bathroom back in Muscatine, Iowa. hahaha

Robert Johnson May 28, 2014 at 9:27 PM Good Gawdy Miss Clawdy, now that is Bawdy. I once met a girl who gave it a whirl. She ended up with a conspicuous curl. Ref. to something. Have a nice day Andrea. :)

Reason A. Poteet May 27, 2014 at 8:01 AM So glad for your AN, yes indeedy, as I'm sure your brother(s) are. Did you have only one? This is bawdy at its best or would that be worst??

David Williams May 25, 2014 at 1:27 PM Andrea you make me blush ha ha ...

Richard Lamoureux May 25, 2014 at 7:27 AM You can't beat a good book but you can beat your meat! Sorry I just couldn't resist.

Scott Thirtyseven May 25, 2014 at 6:15 AM A peed poem, Oh don't I just love those. Nice bit of fun here, thanks for the grin. I've succumbed to your requests and posted a recent tweet. I'm still working on the bigger poem.

Jake Ponce May 25, 2014 at 1:42 AM Does the subject know you wrote this funny anecdotal write about him? Hehehe Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2014 at 10:49 AM this is total fiction. well at least the part about us peeking!!!

Darren Watson May 24, 2014 at 7:15 PM Poor lad was only washing it , lol Best of luck in the contest Andrea ,

Ken Carroll May 24, 2014 at 12:03 PM You were peeking Andrea? Awesome short write..Buen Trabajo!

Deborah Shiells May 24, 2014 at 11:32 AM Hi Andrea, This was very funny and very unique!!! Great to read your wonderful writes my friend. Best to you in the contest:~) Thanks for your visits and your generous comments they are appreciated. Love and Peace, Deborah

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