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Brother Told Us

Brother told us sometimes that he peed
sitting down with a good book to read,
but with his ding-a-ling
he was having a fling
when we spied on him.  Good book indeed!


Written 5/20/14 for Roy Jerden's Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy Limerick Contest

By the way, from comments I am getting, I need to let everyone know this is simply a fabrication. My brother told us nothing, and we never spied on him. And our small bathroom shared by ten people would not have suited this purpose! hahaha
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Date: 6/18/2017 8:49:00 PM
This is so cute. I know what you mean about explaining your poems. Congrats on the win :)
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Date: 10/5/2014 4:36:00 PM
Belated Congratulations but you are so naughty. If you are around, I rewrote my latest poem wich is POD. I think it was probably better before the rewrite but I would like to get your feedback.
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Date: 6/14/2014 12:04:00 AM
Andrea, :)Congratulations on your win. "Linda"
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Date: 6/9/2014 6:04:00 PM
I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara
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Date: 6/9/2014 1:07:00 PM
lol!!!! so funny, Andrea. LaINIE
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:25:00 AM
wonderfully funny Andrea love it congrats on win hugs
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Date: 6/9/2014 12:30:00 AM
Andrea, another bawdy naughty one. Liked it. Mohan
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Date: 6/8/2014 8:26:00 AM
At that age if he was in the bathroom for a long time he was definately reading a book. A couple of minutes several times a day would be ding a ling time. Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 6/8/2014 7:31:00 AM
Andrea, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/8/2014 4:34:00 AM
Quite a humour in this one Andrea ! Congrats on merited win !
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Date: 6/7/2014 9:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, Andrea
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Date: 6/7/2014 9:05:00 PM
Some secrets are not meant to be shared, and keyholes peeked through. Perhaps the book was his cover. I like this one Andrea.
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Date: 6/7/2014 8:01:00 PM
LOL [There once was a man who took showers/he washed from hour to hour/ though very clean/he diddled unseen/his prominence rising to tower!] Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 6/7/2014 7:15:00 PM
LOL oh my goodness, you are silly. what a witty poem, grats on second place :)
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Date: 6/7/2014 5:22:00 PM
LOL!!!!! the ding a ling! :D hilarious witty one!!!! CONGRATULATIONS Andrea.. :D God bless you.. :)
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Date: 5/29/2014 2:36:00 PM
LMAO - I'm still chuckling as I'm writing this. I bet your brother will be glad of the footnote!!!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/29/2014 5:51:00 PM
no worry, Jack, my brother would be as likely to be found at this poetry site or ANY site as he would be likely to be found in our old bathroom back in Muscatine, Iowa. hahaha
Date: 5/28/2014 9:27:00 PM
Good Gawdy Miss Clawdy, now that is Bawdy. I once met a girl who gave it a whirl. She ended up with a conspicuous curl. Ref. to something. Have a nice day Andrea. :)
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Date: 5/27/2014 8:01:00 AM
So glad for your AN, yes indeedy, as I'm sure your brother(s) are. Did you have only one? This is bawdy at its best or would that be worst??
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Date: 5/25/2014 1:27:00 PM
Andrea you make me blush ha ha ...
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Date: 5/25/2014 7:27:00 AM
You can't beat a good book but you can beat your meat! Sorry I just couldn't resist.
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Date: 5/25/2014 6:15:00 AM
A peed poem, Oh don't I just love those. Nice bit of fun here, thanks for the grin. I've succumbed to your requests and posted a recent tweet. I'm still working on the bigger poem.
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Date: 5/25/2014 1:42:00 AM
Does the subject know you wrote this funny anecdotal write about him? Hehehe
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/25/2014 10:49:00 AM
this is total fiction. well at least the part about us peeking!!!
Date: 5/24/2014 7:15:00 PM
Poor lad was only washing it , lol Best of luck in the contest Andrea ,
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Date: 5/24/2014 12:03:00 PM
You were peeking Andrea? Awesome short write..Buen Trabajo!
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Date: 5/24/2014 11:32:00 AM
Hi Andrea, This was very funny and very unique!!! Great to read your wonderful writes my friend. Best to you in the contest:~) Thanks for your visits and your generous comments they are appreciated. Love and Peace, Deborah
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