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Brothel Shuttered

limp roses blue boots, vinyl, knee length hair extensions braided like sun-rings pleasure knick knacks perfume bottles lacey things that hug the bodice under garments, lipstick smudged stained dentures wrappers like scattered seed brothel trash bin overflowing young man slinks from the shadows picks up plum colored leggings "I knew her. My family thought me at church. But there's different ways of worship." brothel walls, graffiti gloom seem to whisper lost shuddering joy gasping delights restless yearning sighs that slip to groans I see a bedspring mattress 'gainst the wall charred remains smoked rawness air, dust brown heavy like her legend powerless voices quiet when the brothel closed sheared unapologetic in the hellish heat of gold. Poem composed: February 17, 2021

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Date: 3/5/2021 11:06:00 PM
Very good! Your poem reflects the deep hidden sadness that people fail to see! A very high quality write that deserves top placement! Congrats!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/6/2021 7:06:00 AM
Hello Krish, Thank you for your generous comments. Yes, the "powerless voices" are the sad laments of the women within. Most thoughtful of you to drop by. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 3/5/2021 1:38:00 PM
i always enjoy reading your poetry, and this is an excellent write, fully deserving of its high placement - congrats on your win!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/5/2021 1:42:00 PM
Hello Charlotte, Thank you immensely. Your entry was stellar. I salute your excellent pen as your submissions consistently startle me with their originality. Sincere good wishes, Brian
Date: 3/5/2021 10:06:00 AM
- Each brothel has its story, Brian - Congratulations on your second place in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/5/2021 1:38:00 PM
My appreciation for your thoughtful comments, Anne-Lise. You are so right - within the brothel there are countless stories, all tales of a wide human sweep. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 3/5/2021 9:01:00 AM
I can only imagine what they would find in a brothels garbage, excellent writing Brian, well deserved high placement in the contest cheers David
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/5/2021 1:46:00 PM
Hello David, Your thumbs up is an ale of good cheer. Thanks very much for your upbeat remarks. Be well. Brian
Date: 3/5/2021 7:17:00 AM
Nice take on the contest Brian. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/6/2021 5:36:00 AM
Yes, quite clear Brian. The picture you paint is a drear and dark life, fraught with melancholia. You tell the story with expertly crafted verse. Stay safe, Linda
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 3/5/2021 1:49:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. I wasn't sure if the narrative of the brothel fire + the lady's loss of life were clear. Happiness + health to you always, Brian
Date: 2/25/2021 5:56:00 AM
“A different kind of worship” - so psychically and prophetically sound and true!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/25/2021 9:22:00 AM
Hello Caren, many thanks for catching quirky lines. I appreciate your views. All the best, Brian

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