Brokenhearted

Why must you be Be so brokenhearted I didn’t mean to hurt you Russell Sivey A modern Senryu

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2012 7:55:00 PM

WEll, you must have done SOMEthing, Russell!! I wonder what word Deborah down here was searching for, an apology not really an apology! Hope it is not based on truth!

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 4/29/2012 7:12:00 PM

Very touching Russell and we've all been there my friend , thank you for sharing , Declan ...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/29/2012 2:13:00 PM

Intertesting topic that you have penned in this Senryu..Some people just don't understand how others have such deep feeling do they...Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/29/2012 1:05:00 PM

Russell, sometimes people take things the wrong way. Ladies are especially sensitive. If you give her some love and reassurance, I'm sure she'll forgive you. I certainly would. Thank you for always giving inspiring comments on my poems. I am one who doubts their abilities, so it really means more than you could ever know. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Broken Butterfly

Date: 4/29/2012 12:16:00 PM

I LOVE it, Rusell!! So many time in life this happens... wonderful, and thanks for your kind comments on my poems

John Rhinem

Date: 4/29/2012 11:25:00 AM

Smile ˜ Well, gazing upon your precious hearts lovely photo, my dear sweet friend, I somehow can understand these dear words ˜ Whom wouldn't be brokenhearted ˜ My love, Always, John!:) ˜

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/29/2012 11:31:00 AM

Well couldn't find what I was looking for only the non-apology apology...I love your beautiful and tender Senryu that reads multiple ways...a gift!! :)

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/29/2012 11:21:00 AM

Very clever Russell...this reminds me of...humm, what's the name of the form ...i have to look it up...lol it's like an apology but not...lol but the appolger doesn't know it...lol Great piece!! let me go find it...Well Done!! big hugs,love ~deb