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Broken Wing

Tackle puller I ; past diverse suffer Light, I saw today on a stage dancer Twirling her hands up, in air ; awake Gazed I in tear ; for precious still be Like no-never-other have seen alike No motion split time no wing broke Not one fallen step by spirit or mind Ay, I plea what I saw was all the real And now I flee, where she dance me 21/04/2017

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Date: 4/27/2017 8:23:00 AM
The first line hooked me the last line reeled me in. And now I flee, where she dance me. I love that line it's awesome. What a great poem.
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Talin Kalishian
Date: 4/27/2017 10:39:00 AM
I am glad you liked it, i have a question though Can a poet know how his words come to be or a poem be?? Coz its confusing.
Date: 4/20/2017 10:42:00 PM
A very creative write, Talin! A great finish too, to an inspirational piece!
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Talin Kalishian
Date: 4/21/2017 9:40:00 AM
Thankx Rick Im a pass in a bit. ;;))

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