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Broken Promise

No matter what a lawyer tells you it always fail You put up your house your car just to make bail They get you so excited Thinking you could fight it But you spend all of your money and still go to jail FOR LAWYER LIMERICK CONTEST

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/6/2012 8:20:00 AM

When I click on one of your poems I know it will be outstanding Faleshia. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 9/17/2010 9:46:00 PM

Really a good one for those pesky vultures in their Marx Bros. suits. Keep it up! Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.

Audrey Haick

Date: 8/30/2010 7:00:00 PM

Good one, Faleshia! "No money back guarantee, here! Hahahaha. Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed this and all the others today. Love, Audrey

James Fraser

Date: 8/30/2010 12:01:00 PM

So true Faleshia, many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2010 5:48:00 AM

Congratulations Faleshia on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Lawyer Limericks". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/30/2010 5:13:00 AM

Congratulations on this fine win in Carolyn's contest, faleshia

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2010 7:11:00 PM

It's so sad too when it happens to good people. Cngratulations on your win, Faleshia. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/29/2010 2:01:00 PM

Congrats Faleshia on your big win in the Limerick contest.. enjoy my friend..this happy Sunday..with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 8/29/2010 12:51:00 PM

Congratulations, Faleshia, on your successful presentation. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/29/2010 12:45:00 PM

And that is how it goes. Congratulations Faleshia.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/29/2010 12:15:00 PM

Your limerick made my bail bondsman friend laugh, Faleshia. Nice work. Congratulations on your win! The competition was awesome and every contestant deserves a round of applause. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/29/2010 11:56:00 AM

good one , congrats on your win

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/29/2010 5:35:00 AM

Best of luck with this perfect write...always Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2010 11:08:00 AM

Sucky lawyers with their double talk. haha! Good luck in the contest, Faleshia.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2010 11:01:00 PM

BAD when that happens. Nice limerick, Faleshia! LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/23/2010 10:18:00 PM

:) Thank you for supporting my contest, Faleshia. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/23/2010 8:37:00 PM

cute one, good luck in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/23/2010 8:24:00 PM

Pretty cool one Faleshia ..good luck in the contest.. sweetie.. so happy to hear from u ...hope u are doing so much better... luv.. appreciate your sweet comments tonight.. when I get home in Sept.. we will talk luv.. promise..ciao..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/23/2010 7:37:00 PM

Enjoying this monday night reading, thank you for the read,, enjoyed your write and good luck on the contest..P.D.