Broken Promise

No matter what a lawyer tells you it always fail
You put up your house your car just to make bail
They get you so excited
Thinking you could fight it
But you spend all of your money and still go to jail


FOR LAWYER LIMERICK CONTEST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/6/2012 8:20:00 AM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be outstanding Faleshia. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2010 9:46:00 PM
Really a good one for those pesky vultures in their Marx Bros. suits. Keep it up! Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.
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Date: 8/30/2010 7:00:00 PM
Good one, Faleshia! "No money back guarantee, here! Hahahaha. Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed this and all the others today. Love, Audrey
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Date: 8/30/2010 12:01:00 PM
So true Faleshia, many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations Faleshia on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Lawyer Limericks". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2010 5:13:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine win in Carolyn's contest, faleshia
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Date: 8/29/2010 7:11:00 PM
It's so sad too when it happens to good people. Cngratulations on your win, Faleshia. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/29/2010 2:01:00 PM
Congrats Faleshia on your big win in the Limerick contest.. enjoy my friend..this happy Sunday..with luv..
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Date: 8/29/2010 12:51:00 PM
Congratulations, Faleshia, on your successful presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/29/2010 12:45:00 PM
And that is how it goes. Congratulations Faleshia.
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Date: 8/29/2010 12:15:00 PM
Your limerick made my bail bondsman friend laugh, Faleshia. Nice work. Congratulations on your win! The competition was awesome and every contestant deserves a round of applause. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/29/2010 11:56:00 AM
good one , congrats on your win
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Date: 8/29/2010 5:35:00 AM
Best of luck with this perfect write...always Michael
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Date: 8/28/2010 11:08:00 AM
Sucky lawyers with their double talk. haha! Good luck in the contest, Faleshia.
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Date: 8/24/2010 11:01:00 PM
BAD when that happens. Nice limerick, Faleshia! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/23/2010 10:18:00 PM
:) Thank you for supporting my contest, Faleshia. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/23/2010 8:37:00 PM
cute one, good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/23/2010 8:24:00 PM
Pretty cool one Faleshia ..good luck in the contest.. sweetie.. so happy to hear from u ...hope u are doing so much better... luv.. appreciate your sweet comments tonight.. when I get home in Sept.. we will talk luv.. promise..ciao..
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Date: 8/23/2010 7:37:00 PM
Enjoying this monday night reading, thank you for the read,, enjoyed your write and good luck on the contest..P.D.
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