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Broken Promise

crow's caw breaks with dawn as the sun lifts light in the sky night's promise broken Heidi Sands 9/11/22

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2022 5:35:00 PM

Those crows do love to caw at first light. I find them such interesting creatures. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 10/1/2022 5:50:00 AM

True they do Sara. Thank you for your visit and kind comment. I hope you enjoy the day :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/22/2022 11:44:00 PM

So pleased to read this gem, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/23/2022 5:45:00 AM

Thank you Harry. I am happy to see your visit. :)

Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 9/16/2022 1:16:00 PM

This is sweet Heidi, I love it! <3

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/16/2022 1:55:00 PM

Thank you very much BJ :)

Michael Tor

Date: 9/12/2022 6:37:00 PM

Love your theme Heidi and a clever piece you have written hear. Blessings to you Dear...

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/13/2022 5:38:00 AM

Thank you Michael. Blessings :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/12/2022 9:49:00 AM

I love the image created by your lovely haiku Heidi! Happy Monday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2022 10:56:00 AM

I am happy to hear that Mike. Thanks. Happy Monday :) xxoo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/11/2022 1:51:00 PM

Dawn enlightens--lovely haiku, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2022 3:25:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/11/2022 12:05:00 PM

Hello Heidi, I like the way you describe the day and dawn. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/11/2022 3:26:00 PM

Hello Heidi, I will and you do the same. Hugs.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2022 3:25:00 PM

Thank you Darlene. I hope you have a nice evening :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/11/2022 10:33:00 AM

Love the imagery in this one Heidi, love the dawn that starts a brand new day. Hope you're keeping well and enjoying your weekend. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2022 11:51:00 AM

Thank you very much Tom. I saw that you were traveling. I hope you had a nice trip :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/11/2022 7:52:00 AM

Love the end line of this beautiful haiku Heidi, hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/11/2022 9:43:00 AM

Thank you very much Joseph. Hugs :)