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Broken Plates

Old men gayish twirls in anger smashing plates as fools do like hurricanes on the horizon cavemen blamed the weather Gods anger they said one thousand gods later only old men still angry fools in caves buildings crumble the void laughs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/12/2018 9:08:00 AM
Your poem expresses such valuable insight so beautifully, Arthur. I especially admire the brilliance of your last line. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/6/2018 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Arthur; this one had me whirling and swirling like a hurricane!
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Date: 10/6/2018 2:56:00 AM
Thank you everyone for your kind words, much appreciated!
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Date: 10/5/2018 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations my friend on this insightful poem being honored with a very well deserved POTD award.
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Date: 10/5/2018 3:30:00 AM
Back with congrats Art :) xomo!
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Date: 10/5/2018 12:26:00 AM
Congratulations Arthur on POTD. Tom.
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Date: 10/4/2018 8:31:00 PM
:)
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Date: 10/4/2018 1:03:00 PM
As soon as I read this I thought it was yours Arthur. Congratulations on having this honored for POTD! : )
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Date: 10/4/2018 12:05:00 PM
I am imagining you spinning plates on a stick...on top are the different planets...which one will you drop first
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Date: 10/4/2018 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations Arthur on POTD!
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Date: 10/4/2018 9:06:00 AM
Hi Arthur, Congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/4/2018 8:46:00 AM
You know how it's done! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/4/2018 8:45:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Arthur
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Date: 10/4/2018 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Arthur.
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Date: 10/4/2018 7:20:00 AM
the revolution of evolution
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Date: 10/4/2018 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD Arthur :)
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Date: 10/4/2018 6:42:00 AM
Congrats Arthur, on poem of the day.
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Date: 10/4/2018 6:12:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Arthur.
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Date: 10/4/2018 4:49:00 AM
Just back to tell ya...Congrats!!! on POTD! Arthur...^WW^
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Date: 10/4/2018 4:20:00 AM
- Well deserved, p.o.t.d. ... CONGRATULATIONS, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/3/2018 7:40:00 PM
Watch out! broken plates on the floor...did you visit our good friend Demetrios for dinner lol...great write Art...love & plates...^WW^
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Date: 10/3/2018 9:19:00 AM
Oooh, good stuff. x
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Date: 10/3/2018 4:56:00 AM
Had to "fav" this one; it was just too good.
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Date: 10/3/2018 12:23:00 AM
I'll just laugh with the void on this one!
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