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Broken Love Slam

Broken Love Slam

How did it come to this
I told you by mail I wasn't piss.
You sure where acting all up into me
Now its over suddenly
You are more than a best friend
Opening my door with one touch from your hand
My thoughts of you are not easy to understand
hmm? Now your like whatever man
That is fine it was not my fault

Never in my wildest dream I ever imagined,
You could give me the best thought out of anything 
that comes along my way.
Happiness does not mean I want to posses everything
Happiness is the smile you bring upon my face
You do not have to be by my side to kiss me goodnight
Once you logoff it like the best conversation to ever ignite.

Do you not recall that one simple song.
"Don't know what you got till its gone."
The truth is,
I did not know what I was missing till I met you. 
How about that song,
"Every rose has it's thorn."
Just like the song (yes) it feels wrong.
Being many miles away and alone, 
I am not searching out for looks,
For what so at the end day he will be an empty book.
Better yet I was not searching to please my heart.
Now you filled it with smiles brought from  many miles apart
I can feel your smiles, 
that is why I always reply to you as My Sweet.

You might not be strong enough to believe in hope,
You edge walker makes me wonder if you are even human.
It's just funny how it took you to make my boat float.
Life lesson learned love starts off with many smiles
Buy the time I hit 100 smiles, 
you are all I am think of.
I will sure  miss them e-kisses, I will hold back the tears.
How about them roses, you would whispers in my ears.
I will end my broken love slam.
With the real message I left for you.
You are what you are, and I am who I am
Life allows us to pass the wrong ones first.
We both fell for eachother, now I wonder what the heck am I cursed.
  By: P.D.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/29/2014 5:05:00 PM
A love lesson that ought to make a person stronger. I suppose in the end it all amounts to "Life allows us to pass the wrong ones first" (unless we're kidding ourselves!) /x/ paul
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Date: 8/13/2013 2:34:00 PM
So who was this one for again? And send me a soupmail or something to let me know what P A means. All I know is Pennsylvania!! haha
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Date: 9/16/2012 12:28:00 AM
Glad you liked my pine poem, PD. I forgot to mention those prickly needles all over my arms. hahaha. Just came down to enter that one in Deb's contest. I was waiting for my lucky number to come up in her contest, and it DID. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/29/2012 11:18:00 PM
hmmm..This sounds so familiar..a nice love slam written here..filled with real emotions that I personally can relate to.
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Date: 6/15/2012 9:09:00 PM
WOW GREAT IMAGERY AND RHYTHM I LOVE THIS POEM SOOOO MUCH TRUTH!!!
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Date: 12/27/2010 9:02:00 AM
how happy i was to have that.e4nn
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Date: 12/27/2010 9:00:00 AM
happiness does'nt mean i want to posses everything. happiness is the smile you bring apon my face. i stoped therebecause i knew there were on other words any where else that would top these. in any poem any where else. that was the understanding that i had with April. john
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Date: 8/24/2010 5:13:00 PM
I'm speechless from your words. You write like no one else on this site. We both write from the heart and both don't care if we get 50 comments or none. We will still write our way. And that my sweet is what connects us. Luv Michael
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:16:00 AM
Long Distance love can certainly grab hold of you. It is easy to find yourself addicted to someone through a screen. Lovely rhyme. Thanks for visiting my page and for the comments.
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Date: 7/22/2010 1:45:00 PM
Beautiful... That doesn't make you cursed. That's just thinking you finally found "it" Over time you find out "it" was nt.. I'm still fighting so I must be alright. I joined the soup because i wanted to share with someone. That's all. I've only been writing for year. I was wondering what others would think of it. So I started sharing. I need to mix in some new stuff and see how that goes over. Be cool. L.L.
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Date: 6/26/2010 7:43:00 PM
Ps. Smile, And, "This Is A Very Warm & Beautiful Poem--To Say The Very Absolute Least--This, Revealing of 'This Depthful & Beautiful Heart & Soul Which, Becomes Your Wonders!!!'":) ~ Smile, on we go....
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Date: 6/26/2010 7:41:00 PM
Smile ~ I highly doubt You are cursed dear--Actually, I think You are very blessed and precious and blessed--Smile, Hello Lovely & Gifted Sidney LeeAnn ~ I missed You and, it was very nice to hear from Your Priceless Heart today--I truly hope that this will become a regular moment between You & I henceforth ~ Smile, let me view one of Your recent post dear lady--My Love to You Always, John!:) ~
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Date: 6/25/2010 9:37:00 AM
Hi, great thoughts on happiness. It's sad when one gets into this situation and it hurts so much, which you have precisely described, great work. Thanks for the comment on my poem, Farewell to Crack Cocaine, I was so proud of my son I wrote it to him hoping to keep his enthusiasm alive. Good luck in your future endeavors and God Bless, Margaret
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Date: 6/24/2010 12:54:00 PM
I may be wrong I see a joke behind your br..slam. The ending takes the cake. Royal....
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Date: 6/21/2010 4:16:00 PM
if the love is was a good one, in the end, there is always something left, and it haunts the two just like a curse. this is sweet, but also a sad reality. are you doing okay? ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 6/21/2010 7:45:00 AM
Don't know what you've got till its gone. .sounds like regrets,you could have had it all,you were there,this is a heartbreaking poem p.d!yet there's always sun after each rain,hold on there. .smile. .
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Date: 6/20/2010 4:46:00 AM
Poet I enjoy the narrative a lot...great write sincere write...! ^_- V
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Date: 6/19/2010 3:28:00 PM
e smile to u
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Date: 6/19/2010 2:58:00 PM
Wow, what a poem. I enjoyed
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Date: 6/19/2010 1:19:00 PM
This one brings back memories of not so long ago.. Thank you for sharing WN
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Date: 6/19/2010 1:08:00 PM
hmmmm, another mystery for me. You had an internet thang? Gosh, PD this is sad, and it's not even really a slam. Just your broken heart. Where is this e-kissing rose giving scoundrel? Let me at him. hahaha. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/18/2010 8:13:00 PM
Are these new slams consenual or are u just defending yourself ..or are they alll in fun.. please cool the jets my BBF P.D. don't want u getting hurt again.. with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/18/2010 6:16:00 PM
This is so amazingly beautiful and heartfelt. Love...is the best, worst feeling of all.
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:47:00 PM
BTW- You got a slam waiting for you!
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:32:00 PM
Wow-- about all I can say to that. Very beautiful, very sad...but no whining, and I like that. Helluva good job!
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