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Broken Hearted Fools

And what of these, these broken-hearted fools, who lust within the silence of disdain play in a lover’s game that has no rules no potion to relieve them of their pain. Skewered by the sword of passion’s lie lashed by lingering memory of lust condemned to live each moment with a sigh while harboring the seed of love’s distrust. They persevere and muddle through the maze of who it was that let it go so wrong realize that it may have been a faze a lingering phrase from an old hit song. They fail to win love’s true treasured jewels and what of these, these broken-hearted fools. ©5/11/2022 Orphan Sonnet Poetry contest Sponsor – Emile Pinet Checked by Howmanysyllables and rhymezone

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Date: 6/13/2022 9:46:00 AM
A very nice sonnet indeed!
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Date: 5/31/2022 7:58:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 5/30/2022 2:44:00 PM
Congratulations on a well-deserved placement.
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Date: 5/30/2022 12:30:00 PM
All too often love does break hearts, whatever the reason may be. Congratulations on your wonderful write having made the winning list, John.
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Date: 5/30/2022 11:57:00 AM
Lust often comes with pain. This is so well expressed in your wonderful winning Orphan Sonnet John. Congratulations on your high placement in Emile’s contest. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/30/2022 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations John! Your wonderful poem "Broken Hearted Fools" earned a distinguished place in my “Orphan Sonnet Contest.” Very well done, my friend, Emile.
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Date: 5/12/2022 1:35:00 AM
Lust can never be true to another. It is only self indulgence. The partner is merely a tool.
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