Home » Poems » Audrey Haick » Broken Heart

Audrey Haick | + Follow Poet |

Broken Heart

Tread lightly: broken heart barely beating Entry in Raul’s “Six Word Masterpiece” Contest

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Kevin Elmore

Date: 1/19/2010 6:18:00 PM

Very nicely done Audrey... and for ur post, i already told this girl. that poem was from awhile back and i just now got around to posting

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2010 10:24:00 PM

Very good, very good. . . .andrea

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/29/2009 1:56:00 PM

All the best in the contest ... I love it.

Danny Nunn

Date: 12/28/2009 7:20:00 PM

It maybe short, but oh so very true, good write and thanks for Living In The Street, a true story as I will have more on the same subject soon..HAPPY NEW YEAR Danny

Robin Maughan

Date: 12/28/2009 6:35:00 PM

Good Luck! And awesome Epigram hugs, Robin

Tim Ryerson

Date: 12/27/2009 6:22:00 PM

Sad and beautiful blended together, Audrey...I know where you're comin' from - Tim

Edward Orozco

Date: 12/24/2009 1:31:00 PM

Good luck in the contest! Eduardo

Edward Orozco

Date: 12/24/2009 1:30:00 PM

I love this! Thank you for your kind comments I always get sad around these times =/. Ed

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/24/2009 7:59:00 AM

So few words yet mighty in message. Great job! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my poetry. Many thanks too for your kind comments they are deeply appreciated. Good Luck in Raul's contest. Have a blessed day~Mary

Marty Owens

Date: 12/23/2009 9:12:00 AM

Love your Epigram...Good luck in the contest...Marty

Brian Strand

Date: 12/23/2009 12:25:00 AM

Best wishes with this one Audrey.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

David Byrne

Date: 12/22/2009 8:21:00 PM

I have spread my dreams under your feet; Tread softly because you tread on my dreams. Yeats. I like your version too!