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10/12/23

No. 1249 New poem only

 

Premiere Contest by Brian Strand

B O E H A T R K N. E R * * * * * *. * * * Cool calm * * soft serene * * humble heart * of mine, * * trembled on shock of betrayal. * * Fault shown on status ‘Marital’, * * Breaking heart appeared Fault Line. * * My heart-beats stopped for moments * * My amour was left only to lament. * * Didn’t expect tragic end of love. . * * Woe secreted from wounded heart * *. yielded pearl of dolor with tears flow . * *. All my feelings turned blunt. * *. fractured heart hard to heal. * * dreamy desires sinking in. * * deep despondency . * * Torn pieces * * of heart * *. to carry * * in rue * *. no hue. * * left. * P >. * A >. I > * * * *. * N> . * *. *. * P>. *. *. *. .* I >. *. * *. .* E >. * *. *. * R >. *. .* C > *. . * I >. *. . * N >. *. .* G >. *. .* H > *. . * E >. . * *. A >. R. >. T >.

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Date: 10/12/2023 3:26:00 AM
Whoa this is absolutely stunning, artistic poem. I love the shape and also how you’ve chosen words for this is beyond fitting for the titled theme
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