Broken Butterfly

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Life from a cocoon This butterfly emerges A fragile beauty With a pair of graceful wings Yet her flight conceals a bruise Edward J. Ebbs - January 31, 2015 Written for a Contest, Write a Poem

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/16/2016 11:04:00 PM

Hi Ed, another beautiful piece of poetry from your pen. How strange so many of us fly through life broken but there is still beauty within us. The broken butterfly still does fly with beautiful wings, a poem that gives hope....Vladislav. A seven rating

Edward Ebbs
Date: 1/17/2016 7:46:00 AM

Thank You Vladislav, you have a gift for seeing through the eyes and heart of those who write as such...

Constance La France

Date: 5/23/2015 8:29:00 AM

Ed, I came back to this lovely poem because I see myself as a broken butterfly, yet even broken I can fly, although you words are few the beauty is great and thanks for visiting my poem, home of my childhood, you know I went back to the neighbourhood as an adult and it was a slum, but the memory of the beauty lingers

Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2015 8:02:00 AM

oh my gosh, Ed, and that is why I say myself in your beautiful words, I am so honored and you captured my reflection brilliantly

Edward Ebbs
Date: 6/21/2015 1:30:00 AM

The poem is your reflection; we were instructed to "Write a poem about someone on Soup"

Edward Ebbs
Date: 5/23/2015 11:04:00 AM

Yes, I know you do, and I know you can still fly...