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Broken Brain

Reflected light is shimmering here, finding me floundering in my fluff, gazing at this shattered glass as I dance, dance away, away. I cut my bare toes - sixty steps to the minute, those sixty seconds, sixty seconds: click-click, tick-tock, bop-bop. Your shine dims like a dull, dull dime in my battered brain, seeing the blood on my toes, as they dance, prance on the shattered shimmering glass. A battered brain is shapeless stuff that lets me flounder in my fluff. The shattered brain sees shattered glass. They'll take this tumour away. Will humour return, humanity remain, once I've danced, pranced for those surgical folk in masks who'll take knives to my brain? (6/7 Feb 2023)

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Date: 3/7/2023 8:02:00 PM
a poem of a serious illness, i wonder John, have wrote myself poems on this subject..Interesting and gives one concern, so the poem has the power to hold, the reader.
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Andrew John
Date: 3/8/2023 2:49:00 AM
Thank you, Harry.
Date: 2/28/2023 8:13:00 AM
"a battered brain is a shapeless brain that lets me flounder in my fluff", very graphic write. I do hope it's all in the past tense now if it was a personal experience and that you are on the way to healing and dancing and prancing again?
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Andrew John
Date: 3/8/2023 2:51:00 AM
Yes, largely Yours Truly. Three and a half years ago. They took my brain out and put sawdust in. Well . . . I do feel changes in way brain works, and possibly - hopefully - for the better. Weird feelings, changes. Wooh!
Date: 2/26/2023 10:03:00 AM
very unique poetry, John. I sure hope I never need brain surgery!
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Andrew John
Date: 3/8/2023 2:51:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea.

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