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Heartbroken

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“It’s hard asking someone with a broken heart to fall in love again.” – Eric Kripke I'll excuse you for not being ready to give Your broken heart to me. I could see it bleeding Right through your eyes. Its also in... Your voice, your fragile smile, your body language My sweet, I promise to give your heart all the time it needs To repair, to beat, without skipping beats I'd love more than anything to put a tourniquet On it to stem the steady hemorrhaging To make it smile the way it used to For me, for the whole human race Submitted for... ''H'' Contest, New Or Old Poems Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Original Titie: Broken Bleeding Heart Theme: Heartbroken Date: 09/07/2021 Date originally written : 07/19/2019

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Garima Dubey
Date: 9/9/2021 7:45:00 AM
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So many emotions and memories hidden in the corner of my heart came afloat after reading this.Congratulations on your win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/9/2021 5:58:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Garima:-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/9/2021 5:58:00 AM
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My hearts beating at this, thinking of my dad’s heartbreak. Well written. Congratulations, dear friend!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/9/2021 6:22:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Kim:-)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/9/2021 1:20:00 AM
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"I promise to give your heart all the time it needs To repair, to beat, without skipping beats" Indeed, a beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/9/2021 6:21:00 AM
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Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
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Constance La France
Date: 9/8/2021 9:27:00 PM
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Edward, congratulations on your win in my "H" Contest, New or Old with your beautiful poem ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/9/2021 6:19:00 AM
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Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and my placement, Constance:-) Most obliged.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/8/2021 3:41:00 PM
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Congratulations, Edward! A wonderfully moving and poignant piece of writing. I love it! BW~ Mala
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/9/2021 6:20:00 AM
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Thank you very much, Mala:-)
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Georgia Kereopa
Date: 7/25/2019 6:48:00 AM
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Congratulations Edward on our win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/25/2019 11:38:00 AM
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Thank you, Georgia:-)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/24/2019 1:46:00 PM
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Nicely penned Edward. Congrats on your win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/24/2019 6:46:00 PM
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Thank you, Jeanne:-)
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Constance La France
Date: 7/24/2019 12:57:00 PM
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Edward, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this great poem, wonderfully penned - well done !
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/24/2019 1:24:00 PM
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Thank you so much for my placement, Constance:-)

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