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Broken

I'm broken... shattered.... in pieces on the floor,  the invisible shards no one looks  for once they clean up the main mess of shattered glass,  I am the dust bunnies under the couch,  the dust particals in the air,  I am nothing,  yet when the time comes  I will fight back with all the power I have.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/26/2017 7:48:00 AM
Ohhh, I like this style, short clipped hard jabs, only thing I'd change is remove the word " lying" in line 3 , not needed, the reader senses it , so let em run with the harsh " in pieces on the floor".....it's a better visual, lying implies quite sedate...but your not..your "shattered"
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