Broken

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The broken gate hangs limp 'pon one hinge Age cripples the man of the house

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Abosede Ogundare

Date: 11/17/2016 3:37:00 PM

Beautiful write Sara, sometimes old age makes little fixing look like moving mountains.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/17/2016 4:37:00 AM

Excellent. A thought provoking write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/12/2016 6:25:00 AM

This is a well done crystalline:)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 11/11/2016 11:56:00 PM

Wow u drew a clever analogy btw an old man and a broken gate in splendid poetic couplet style. Kudos. So Nice to read from yor ink again.

John Lawless

Date: 11/11/2016 8:58:00 PM

The reversal...effect and cause...A thought provoking write Sara.

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/11/2016 7:54:00 PM

A bird of semi perceptible sensations flew in and out as I read your Broken in Crystalline ...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/12/2016 6:31:00 AM

I glad that bird did not stay..Thanks for dropping by..Sara