Broken

These are words that have not yet been spoken,... and,..uh,...and well,...hmmmmm. Damn, I think my rhymer is broken.

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Melody Wiggett

Date: 5/16/2022 12:08:00 AM

:) I like this:) made me smile:)

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/4/2009 9:20:00 PM

hehe. not really. And it was fun. Thanks for the ride. I think something great is coming very soon. Best wishes, Caroline.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/28/2009 4:33:00 PM

lol nawwwww it needs to be tickled! Light & Love

Lena Townsend

Date: 11/23/2009 8:53:00 PM

This made me laugh and I needed that today. My favorite quote~ the most wasted of all days is a day without laughter~ee cummings~ Thank you for the smiles. Smiles from Lolita (Lena or Lolita, either works for me. My given name is Lena, Lolita is just a special name that my lost love gave to me that I use in my writing in memory of him because he always believed in me)

Simone Segal

Date: 11/22/2009 5:58:00 AM

Very funny! go fix! love Simone

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/21/2009 8:43:00 PM

It's not broken, you've just spoken. (pun intended) Witty and delightful, Bill! Love, Carolyn