Broken

In shadows cast by tender years,
A sad childhood's tale appears,
A heart that once knew innocence,
Now haunted by its recompense.

The echoes of laughter once filled the air,
Now replaced by a silence, heavy and rare,
A family's embrace turned cold and distant,
Leaving a wounded soul, frail and nonexistent.

A canvas painted with memories bittersweet,
Innocence shattered, a loss so complete,
The bonds that should've held strong and tight,
Now fractured, scattered, lost in the night.

Discarded, like remnants of a forgotten dream,
In the sea of abandonment, adrift it seems,
But within these scars, a strength takes root,
A spirit resilient, though pain's pursuit.

For broken wings still yearn to fly,
Through stormy nights and tear-streaked sky,
A heartache's fire fuels a will to mend,
To find solace in wounds that time will tend.

Though family's love may have gone awry,
A broken childhood won't define the sky,
With every sunrise, a chance to renew,
To heal, to grow, to build life anew.

Remember, dear soul, you're not alone,
In your journey to heal, to find a home,
For in the brokenness, you'll find your worth,
And rise from the ashes, a phoenix rebirthed.

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Date: 2/26/2024 4:49:00 AM
Many (including me) have had an unpleasant childhood. It's rather unfortunate, but I like your resolve. We get to parent the child in ourselves as we redo things differently and break the cycle of mistreatment that occurs in some families. Good luck with it all. The good news is it also led to your beautiful poem.
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Date: 10/2/2023 7:42:00 AM
I put this heartfelt poem on my FAVs list, Aysha. It is so beautifully written, for such a sad circumstance. Welcome to the family here at Poetry Soup. You will find new friend and support here among other poets who write heartfelt and soulful poetry. I'm also adding you to my list of poets I follow; I hope you'll follow my poetry as well. You have a gift of poetry, my friend. Use is well. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 1/20/2024 1:07:00 AM
I'm touched by your positive feedback on my poem. Thank you for your kind words; they inspire me to keep writing. Sorry, I seemed to have missed so many comments here. Better late than never!
Date: 9/18/2023 8:54:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem Aysha. Very, very touching and so well written. You write and express so well. ‘ For broken wings still yearn to fly’. The last stanza is so wonderful with strength and hope shining through. Blessings to you. :)
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/20/2023 1:22:00 PM
Thank you, I appreciate the lovely comments.
Date: 8/25/2023 9:17:00 PM
Some of us can relate. Beautifully written and heartfelt. Best to you, Aysha :)
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/16/2023 10:51:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 8/25/2023 8:38:00 PM
An angel with broken wings, a resilienence rare -- she paints a landscape of azure sky's and rainbows reaches out and flys. We make our own family Aysha, friends are everywhere. Beautifully written, I'd like to read more. Bol Anaya
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/16/2023 10:51:00 PM
Very kind of you, thanks, poetry is therapy for me!
Date: 8/25/2023 6:17:00 AM
Aysha, your truly excellent, skillfully-written poem vividly describes child abuse in its many forms. Such a moving piece! The last two stanzas stand out as a beacon of hope! Janice
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/16/2023 10:51:00 PM
Thanks, I always wish to believe we can all heal, I am a work in progress.
Date: 8/25/2023 5:57:00 AM
Highly emotive poem, Aysha. I like the message of resilience and the reassurance you convey in the ending lines.
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/16/2023 10:50:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/25/2023 5:19:00 AM
No matter how damaged we may be, it is crucial that we possess a strong ability to bounce back. Even if our metaphorical wings are shattered, with time they will mend and enable us to reach great heights. Aysha, your writing is like a potent ink that leaves a lasting impact. The conclusion, filled with hope and positivity, is truly remarkable. Thanks for your comment on my page and BOL in the contest
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/16/2023 10:50:00 PM
Thank you, English is not my first language, it takes me ages to write a poem, and I find it good therapy to deal with the pain of the past.
Date: 8/25/2023 5:06:00 AM
However broken we are, we should be resilient. Though the wings are broken, they will be healed in time and will be capable of soaring high. As long as this hope propels us, nothing is lost ! Like a phoenix, from the ashes you can rise ! Poignant and heart stirring...... .Beautiful poem, dear Aysha !
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/16/2023 10:47:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 8/25/2023 4:24:00 AM
excellent ink Aysha, the uplifting ending is so wonderful. I can relate in some aspects of my own upbringing but now I am flying high with my poetry. hugs jan xx
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Aysha Nuwas
Date: 9/16/2023 10:47:00 PM
Thanks in fact your poem inspired this one.
Date: 8/25/2023 1:15:00 AM
- A heartbreaking poem, Aysha ... no child should experience ... " broken wings still yearn to fly" - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 9/16/2023 10:46:00 PM
Thanks, I am new here, had no idea about contests!
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