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A broken people hearts and souls and a land ravaged and destroyed, Look closely at how the earthenware pot was smashed- small repairs. A broken list of lives, remembered once now forgotten- remember! Like a mirror that has cracked fallen from its rusted nail-still used. We see a reflection within and look away- best not to dwell on its image, All was once whole and beautiful and we claim its destruction is just. You would not look at the view outside our window to such injustice, Just closed your eyes and pretended you never noticed. Remember now. Did not the gods chose our destiny? where are they now? did they hold the lost? Let not their sacrifices be in vain for freedom costs us dearly.

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Date: 12/12/2019 7:18:00 AM
We can never put on God the blame dearest, Julie! The path is indicated to all but not all of us are willing to follow. God doesn't coerce anyone therefore remains blameless! A profound poem!
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Julie Achilles
Date: 12/16/2019 8:18:00 AM
yes you are right of course, thank you. Julie
Date: 12/12/2019 6:06:00 AM
It always does Julie and I say this with a heave laden heart. Still being warriors that we are we stay in it with swords and battle cries, I know deep down he weeps with us, beautiful touching poem that speaks volumes. Thank you Julie, wishing you a season of peace and love.
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Date: 12/16/2019 8:18:00 AM
thank you and peace to you too Julie

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