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Broken

Inside, I will dwell,
  hidden from reality;
    where I will not feel the  KNIFE . . . 
I will dip my pen,
  and write poetry in blood;
    from my sad and quiet  h e a r t .

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April 30, 2019


Poetry/Sedoka/Broken
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1140-668-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Best Sedoka, 577, 577
sponsor, Lu Loo

First Place

Copyright © Constance La France | Year Posted 2019

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/11/2019 3:21:00 PM Congratulations on the wonderful win, sweetie! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/12/2019 8:03:00 AM Andrea, thanks so much for the congratulations !!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/10/2019 1:43:00 PM - Congratulations on your awesome winning poem, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 6/10/2019 6:41:00 PM Anne-Lise thank you for visiting my poem with congratulations ~

Alkas Poetry Date: 5/12/2019 7:49:00 AM Dear Heart, I like to read the forms of poetry I do not do to try to write them. Yours was intriguing   good work. Salute alkas Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/13/2019 11:06:00 AM Alkas thank you for visiting my poem and commenting, appreciate!

CayCay Jennings Date: 5/8/2019 3:43:00 PM Love it - beautifully sad. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/13/2019 11:05:00 AM CayCay thanks for the great comment!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Date: 5/3/2019 8:23:00 AM Wonderful Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/13/2019 11:03:00 AM Thank you Allen for the wonderful !

John Gondolf Date: 5/2/2019 1:39:00 PM This is wonderful, Constance, nicely done. Good luck in the contest. John Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/13/2019 11:03:00 AM John, thank you for visiting my poem!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/1/2019 10:01:00 AM Excellent! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/1/2019 4:42:00 PM Kim, thanks for the excellent !

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/1/2019 8:41:00 AM We do purge our inner most heartache onto paper with our blood ink. Superbly created Constance! : ) xxoo Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/1/2019 4:43:00 PM Connie, thanks for the compliment, appreciate !

Caren Krutsinger Date: 5/1/2019 12:23:00 AM A darling sedoka. "write poetry in blood" - this is what it feels like sometimes, as we turn our souls inside out on paper, bleeding our truth. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/1/2019 8:38:00 AM Caren, thanks for visiting, yes you are right sometimes it does feel like we are writing with blood ~

Ralph Sergi Date: 4/30/2019 1:40:00 PM Powerful imagery, Lu. Blood and loneliness. Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 5/1/2019 8:39:00 AM Ralph, I am sure you meant DH not Lu but I will take the compliment !