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Inside, I will dwell, hidden from reality; where I will not feel the KNIFE . . . I will dip my pen, and write poetry in blood; from my sad and quiet h e a r t . ___________________________ April 30, 2019 Poetry/Sedoka/Broken Copyright Protected, ID 19-1140-668-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Best Sedoka, 577, 577 sponsor, Lu Loo First Place

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Date: 6/11/2019 3:21:00 PM
Congratulations on the wonderful win, sweetie!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2019 8:03:00 AM
Andrea, thanks so much for the congratulations !!!!
Date: 6/10/2019 1:43:00 PM
- Congratulations on your awesome winning poem, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 6/10/2019 6:41:00 PM
Anne-Lise thank you for visiting my poem with congratulations ~
Date: 5/12/2019 7:49:00 AM
Dear Heart, I like to read the forms of poetry I do not do to try to write them. Yours was intriguing   good work. Salute alkas
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Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2019 11:06:00 AM
Alkas thank you for visiting my poem and commenting, appreciate!
Date: 5/8/2019 3:43:00 PM
Love it - beautifully sad.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2019 11:05:00 AM
CayCay thanks for the great comment!
Date: 5/3/2019 8:23:00 AM
Wonderful
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Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2019 11:03:00 AM
Thank you Allen for the wonderful !
Date: 5/2/2019 1:39:00 PM
This is wonderful, Constance, nicely done. Good luck in the contest. John
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Constance La France
Date: 5/13/2019 11:03:00 AM
John, thank you for visiting my poem!
Date: 5/1/2019 10:01:00 AM
Excellent!
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Constance La France
Date: 5/1/2019 4:42:00 PM
Kim, thanks for the excellent !
Date: 5/1/2019 8:41:00 AM
We do purge our inner most heartache onto paper with our blood ink. Superbly created Constance! : ) xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 5/1/2019 4:43:00 PM
Connie, thanks for the compliment, appreciate !
Date: 5/1/2019 12:23:00 AM
A darling sedoka. "write poetry in blood" - this is what it feels like sometimes, as we turn our souls inside out on paper, bleeding our truth.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/1/2019 8:38:00 AM
Caren, thanks for visiting, yes you are right sometimes it does feel like we are writing with blood ~
Date: 4/30/2019 1:40:00 PM
Powerful imagery, Lu. Blood and loneliness.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/1/2019 8:39:00 AM
Ralph, I am sure you meant DH not Lu but I will take the compliment !

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