Broken-Hearted Caressing Sorrow

Broken-Hearted Caressing Sorrow Where do you bring a broken heart, damaged dreams that won’t depart? Where do you go when things fall apart, serving silent screams a la carte? What do you do with a saddened soul, within a virulent void a skinless sole? What do you do when you’re in a hole, progressive paranoid a shadow stroll? Within the stillness of my solitude, a storm exists admits a sacrificing seclude The eyeful emptiness of a life subdued, the evil enlists a blasphemous brood Within the veil of my bitter black, the idolatrous infant sleeps in a shackled sac On the wall, my punitive plaque, of the wounded weeps that scornfully stack Who will be there for me, to mourn, escaping earth a denticulate dust reborn? Who will be there for me, to warn, a residual rebirth of a lifeless embryo torn? Who will kiss me before I dimly die, a wretched wreck in a shattered satirical sky? Who will be there for me, to cry, a segregated speck ceremonially left to calcify? Oct.13.2017 Broken-Hearted Poems Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Date: 10/26/2017 8:27:00 AM
So beautiful to read this, ^WW^, nice rhyme, congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 10/18/2017 10:30:00 AM
Very cool poem, WW. You can mix your metaphors w/the best of 'em. Denticulate, eh. Gotta look that one up. Blasphemous brood, idolatrous infant, shadow stroll. Your gift of phrases is unique. I would love to know what label you would brand me, friend. Your pen sings as always. Solar style poetry. Love and joy always.
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Date: 10/18/2017 6:00:00 AM
Warrior, I enjoyed reading your work. I can make words rhyme but I am at a loss to pen such poetic writes as yours. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/17/2017 10:20:00 PM
Best wishes and big congrats on your well-earned win, Winged Warrior - keep up the great poetry, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/17/2017 1:23:00 PM
Winged, excellent! Congratulations on your win in my contest with this awesome write and I love your image and music too !
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Date: 10/16/2017 9:06:00 PM
^WW^, great a write, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 10/16/2017 4:57:00 PM
WoW! WW, Good internal rhymes, content and imagery. Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the "Broken Hearted Poem contest " - Alexis
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Date: 10/16/2017 3:54:00 PM
Wow WW, another magnificent example of your internal rhyme, I am in awe of your talent, the way you put together unusual word pairings, just amazing!!! Congrats on a great win!
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Date: 10/15/2017 12:23:00 PM
I am here WW....You've got a friend whenever you call...Enjoyed it...Have a nice Sunday
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Date: 10/14/2017 3:41:00 AM
Well we better make sure to be there before that happens now. I'd hate to see you a segregated speck left to calcify, ceremoniously or not WW. Another brilliant one of yours and of course yet again the music is an excellent choice. Luck in the contest Take care...Maria
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Date: 10/13/2017 7:45:00 AM
This pierces my heartstrings and tears them apart one by one until all that is left are tears of mournful cries! I am in awe of this amazing poem here my friend, what a tremendous piece! You have written such a magnificently saddened write here SO, that it takes a while to gather your thoughts after reading such a splendidly well written poem as this one! Great Work!!
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Date: 10/13/2017 7:03:00 AM
Indeed a broken-hearted poem ... piercing cry of pain ... very well written ...
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Date: 10/13/2017 6:10:00 AM
Very insightful poem--so many passionate queries--well written WW--best for a win!
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Date: 10/13/2017 6:09:00 AM
Reminds me of the song, what becomes of the broken hearted..Another great poem with internal rhyme, you do this very well..
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