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The weeping strains of forlorn love s c a t t e r e d along the highway of my disconsolate life drowned by incessant overpowering noise... Will she hear a single note? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - "Broken-hearted Poems" contest by Broken Wings Placed 4th © 13th October 2017

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/24/2017 8:29:00 PM

The shining sadness of heartbreak in all its glorious beauty Paul! Your write is captivating in deep emotional imagery and your last two lines are delicately poignant... You inspire me my friend!

Paul Callus
Date: 11/25/2017 2:28:00 PM

Your insightful comments inspire me to achieve new heights, Susan:) Thank you. Warm regards // paul

Ricky Muse

Date: 10/22/2017 11:10:00 PM

"The weeping strains of forlorn love s c a t t e r e d along the highway of my disconsolate life." What would the world be without irony. Nice poem.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/23/2017 11:05:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Richard. Best regards // paul

Red Fiery

Date: 10/18/2017 12:37:00 PM

I can actually put myself in this situation..an excellent piece of work ! Hugs ~ Redfiery~

Paul Callus
Date: 10/18/2017 1:33:00 PM

Thank you for your feedback, Smriti. Love is important in our lives, although as you know, it can be painful at times! Hugs // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/18/2017 8:56:00 AM

Short, but so powerful and heartbreaking, Paul. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 10/18/2017 1:30:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra. (Loved the picture of you & your cat). Regards // paul

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/17/2017 10:58:00 PM

Best wishes and big congrats on your well-earned win, Paul - keep up the great poetry, my friend! :-)

Paul Callus
Date: 10/18/2017 1:29:00 PM

Thank you, my friend. You are a natural writer and I like your work. Regards // paul

Constance La France

Date: 10/17/2017 1:33:00 PM

Paul, congratulations on your win in my contest with this sad write, I love your layout too !

Paul Callus
Date: 10/17/2017 4:34:00 PM

Thank you, Constance. I always find your contests inspiring. Regards // paul

Maria Williams

Date: 10/17/2017 1:25:00 AM

I was going to say this is a Winner in my eyes Paul, and I see from Eve's comment that you have won. Congratulations Paul, so well deserved...Maria

Paul Callus
Date: 10/17/2017 9:21:00 AM

Thank you, Maria; your lovely comments and congrats are appreciated. Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 10/16/2017 9:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Paul!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/17/2017 9:04:00 AM

Thank you, Eve. Once again I congratulate you on obtaining top placement. Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2017 4:12:00 PM

Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this one even though it is sad...Thanks for dropping by my page..Sara

Paul Callus
Date: 10/15/2017 7:14:00 AM

Sadness has a beautiful side to it, too, Sara! Thank you for reading and commenting. Regards // paul

John Michaels

Date: 10/14/2017 6:49:00 AM

Nicely-penned, Paul. A sad write, for sure. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Regards, John.

Paul Callus
Date: 10/14/2017 6:55:00 AM

Thank you, John...pleased to finally have someone stopping by with a lovely comment:) Regards // paul