Broken-Hearted - Wailing Ladies

We are ladies-in-waiting and martyrs, as tears are hardened like trails of muddy barracks… yet in the aggressive power- courts; each detonating bullet hemorrhages all veins of war- torn flesh , our stained faces pretending to play and underplay the hurt of wounds within. How long are those late twilights as we anticipate a riddled uncertainty within our homes' rotten gates and dim lamps for the screeching angst to halt. cease: The radio blasts hideous self-pity into the stings, the bladder of evenings when a combat fires deathly pellets through broken hearts of our sons, husbands : Will daytime become Aurora’s reward? Maidens of hope, we wail and quaver for men in camouflage… dear life, speak! Are they lost. dead. or agile?… pained, we remain mute ladies-in-waiting. ~*~ Contest of Broken Wings: Broken-Hearted Poems Written 10/14/2017

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Date: 10/17/2017 10:21:00 PM
Best wishes and big congrats on your well-earned win, Nette - keep up the great poetry, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/17/2017 1:27:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this emotional write !
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Date: 10/17/2017 7:27:00 AM
Wonderful poem, Nette, congratulations:)
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Date: 10/16/2017 9:16:00 PM
Great imigary, Nette, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 10/16/2017 5:29:00 PM
Nette, you have penned that scenario very well. So many women have anxiously waited for their loved one to come back home. Congratulations on your placement in the "Broken Hearted Poem contest ". It was well deserved- Alexis
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Date: 10/15/2017 7:00:00 AM
Nette, you have captured the gut level anxiety only a lady-in-waiting can feel! Thank you for sharing this wonderful message. Bravo! chuck
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Date: 10/14/2017 4:04:00 PM
This is such a wonderful poem, very powerful and I love your use of words here, this is a fav for me!
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Date: 10/14/2017 10:26:00 AM
You have captured what most people never truly understand unless they have experienced it...good luck
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Date: 10/14/2017 5:51:00 AM
Silent pain of waiting for a dear one, and the agony of combat so well depicted in your poem nette! Best for a win!
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Date: 10/14/2017 2:32:00 AM
Wow, what a powerful and emotional write my friend! You have written a magnificently painful poem here Nette! I surely loved the way to have written this tremendous piece here this morning! What an intricate piece, Great Work!!
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