Bring the Sky Nearer To Me

Bring the sky nearer to me give me back the childhood days, so near to me that I can see a rainbow's kiss with sunrays! Give me back the childhood days those wonder eyes to see in sky, a rainbow's kiss with sunrays butterfly dreams free to fly! Those wonder eyes to see in sky a twilight's birth with morning dream, butterfly dreams free to fly like childhood dawn's first sun beam! A twilight's birth with morning dream so near to me that I can see, like childhood dawn's first sun beam bring the sky nearer to me! © kashinath karmakar ============000==============

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 7/26/2013 10:41:00 AM
Very appropriate verse for the form light hearted, charming. Light & Love
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Date: 6/25/2013 3:31:00 PM
a trip back to care free days of childhood love it well penned Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/20/2013 10:34:00 PM
Kash, thanks for seeing three of my poems today. Wish I could review some of your oldies but joe is saying, hurry up!! yes, if I published my poems, can you imagine that book? I would not even know how to put it together, I have so many different types of poems. How would you arrange YOURS?
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Date: 5/27/2013 10:16:00 AM
Kash - I am so glad I read this today. It is such a gem about something we all wish for, Innocence, discovering and sunshine. love, Kathy
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Date: 5/24/2013 12:26:00 AM
Very great pantoum and your title is a winner! To little kids the sky was almost something you could touch... now it's just something that's "there", and the mentality of it is very sad. Awesome work!
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Date: 5/19/2013 11:37:00 AM
yesss!.. sweet cheers on your win , kash... didn't ge to join this ; you are gold!..;)
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Date: 5/19/2013 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations, Kash, on this poem. I hope you finally reached the sky! RAY
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Date: 5/19/2013 10:39:00 AM
I love this piece so much. Congrats on your brilliant win in the contest. AO
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Date: 5/19/2013 1:06:00 AM
Beautiful arrangment. Love the whimsical images and elegant flow.
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Date: 5/17/2013 6:55:00 PM
This vividly brought back my own childhood days Kash...Great job and congrats - Tim
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Date: 5/17/2013 6:49:00 PM
Congratulations... :-)
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Date: 5/17/2013 5:45:00 PM
Hello Kash, very dreamy, plus more. Congratulations. xox~ Linda
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Date: 5/17/2013 9:49:00 AM
Kash, how wonderful to see you here again with one of your best forms to write in, the pantoum. How ARE you? I miss seeing you every day like in the old times. Soupmail me sometime. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/16/2013 8:14:00 PM
I love your butterfly dreams line Kash ..this is a beautiful poem all the way round....
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Date: 5/16/2013 4:24:00 PM
oh my, i feel a natural grace in your words, kashi... the form, in which you've written these delicate lines, is enthralling...each stanza is a poem within itself... yessss!..:) huggs
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Date: 5/16/2013 11:39:00 AM
Such a beauty this is........it touches that sky, so near to you with blissful words!! :)
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Date: 5/16/2013 10:08:00 AM
nicely penned Kash....best wishes
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Date: 5/16/2013 12:16:00 AM
Kash...what imagery! What beauty! What serenity and joy this evokes! A 7 from me! Thanks for the breath of fresh air this morning.
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Date: 5/16/2013 12:16:00 AM
Ooooopppps....forget to hit that seven!
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Date: 5/15/2013 11:40:00 PM
I am in awe of your ability to write so well...Seren
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Date: 5/15/2013 9:03:00 PM
Wow, this is an excellent a masterfully written poem my friend! Kashi. I am so impressed with your write, it's been too long since I've read one of your awesome Pantoums, quite awesome indeed! I really enjoyed reading this magnificent poem this evening! What a remarkable piece, Great Work!!
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