Kash Poet Poet Pantoum

Bring the Sky Nearer To Me

Bring the sky nearer to me
give me back the childhood days,
so near to me that I can see
a rainbow's kiss with sunrays!


Give me back the childhood days
those wonder eyes to see in sky,
a rainbow's kiss with sunrays
butterfly dreams free to fly!


Those wonder eyes to see in sky
a twilight's birth with morning dream,
butterfly dreams free to fly
like childhood dawn's first sun beam!


A twilight's birth with morning dream
so near to me that I can see,
like childhood dawn's first sun beam
bring the sky nearer to me!



© kashinath karmakar


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Debbie Guzzi July 26, 2013 at 10:41 AM Very appropriate verse for the form light hearted, charming. Light & Love

Shadow Hamilton June 25, 2013 at 3:31 PM a trip back to care free days of childhood love it well penned Shadow x smiles

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2013 at 10:34 PM Kash, thanks for seeing three of my poems today. Wish I could review some of your oldies but joe is saying, hurry up!! yes, if I published my poems, can you imagine that book? I would not even know how to put it together, I have so many different types of poems. How would you arrange YOURS?

Kathryn Collins May 27, 2013 at 10:16 AM Kash - I am so glad I read this today. It is such a gem about something we all wish for, Innocence, discovering and sunshine. love, Kathy

Timothy Hicks May 24, 2013 at 12:26 AM Very great pantoum and your title is a winner! To little kids the sky was almost something you could touch... now it's just something that's "there", and the mentality of it is very sad. Awesome work!

Nette Onclaud May 19, 2013 at 11:37 AM yesss!.. sweet cheers on your win , kash... didn't ge to join this ; you are gold!..;)

Ray Dillard May 19, 2013 at 11:08 AM Congratulations, Kash, on this poem. I hope you finally reached the sky! RAY

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 19, 2013 at 10:39 AM I love this piece so much. Congrats on your brilliant win in the contest. AO

Karen Anglesey May 19, 2013 at 1:06 AM Beautiful arrangment. Love the whimsical images and elegant flow.

Tim Ryerson May 17, 2013 at 6:55 PM This vividly brought back my own childhood days Kash...Great job and congrats - Tim

Donna Jones May 17, 2013 at 6:49 PM Congratulations... :-)

Poet Destroyer A May 17, 2013 at 5:45 PM Hello Kash, very dreamy, plus more. Congratulations. xox~ Linda

Andrea Dietrich May 17, 2013 at 9:49 AM Kash, how wonderful to see you here again with one of your best forms to write in, the pantoum. How ARE you? I miss seeing you every day like in the old times. Soupmail me sometime. Luv, Andrea

Donna Jones May 16, 2013 at 8:14 PM I love your butterfly dreams line Kash ..this is a beautiful poem all the way round....

Nette Onclaud May 16, 2013 at 4:24 PM oh my, i feel a natural grace in your words, kashi... the form, in which you've written these delicate lines, is enthralling...each stanza is a poem within itself... yessss!..:) huggs

Carrie Richards May 16, 2013 at 11:39 AM Such a beauty this is........it touches that sky, so near to you with blissful words!! :)

Joseph May May 16, 2013 at 10:08 AM nicely penned Kash....best wishes

Eileen Manassian May 16, 2013 at 12:16 AM Ooooopppps....forget to hit that seven!

Eileen Manassian May 16, 2013 at 12:16 AM Kash...what imagery! What beauty! What serenity and joy this evokes! A 7 from me! Thanks for the breath of fresh air this morning.

Seren Roberts May 15, 2013 at 11:40 PM I am in awe of your ability to write so well...Seren

Russell Sivey May 15, 2013 at 9:03 PM Wow, this is an excellent a masterfully written poem my friend! Kashi. I am so impressed with your write, it's been too long since I've read one of your awesome Pantoums, quite awesome indeed! I really enjoyed reading this magnificent poem this evening! What a remarkable piece, Great Work!!