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Bring Me To Peace

when the truth arrived enveloped, it was November and at the inception standing quiet the rags of innocence were ripped from my eyes I mourned what never was grasping at this breech of faith both hands reached and disappeared into the vapour, where once you laid to rest paper fluttered down I hadn’t realised I had given more than I intended never seeing the game that was played in the shadows of the day my life-force was attained belief in humanity suffered and shattered from the burn of this betrayal, paranoia sits with me hand in hand my fingers tapped out the tune as the veracity of this deception, was validated time and time again So I am not mad but grieving

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/21/2011 6:43:00 PM
Enjoyed the emotional expressions, Jayne
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:51:00 AM
It is so hot here in Ohio the last few days and they say stay in if you can. Well I can and so I thought this would be a wonderful day to thank everyone for their kind comments on my poetry. So I say thank you to you for the kind words and for sharing your amazing poetry with us Jayne. It was so wonderful seeing your posts this morning my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:18:00 AM
Good one about the emotions that accompany betrayl..Enjoyed reading this morn.Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 7/21/2011 6:04:00 AM
well Jayne ..long time ..and u have not lost your creative touch ..this is a stunning stirring emotional write and so deeply penetrating to the soul .. luv is brutal at time.. a learning curve always.. after betrayal ..good things happen.. a cycle undeniable my friend.. oh please keep in touch now that u have returned and thankxx for your sweet critique on my poetry luv..
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