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Bring Me Home

I'd like to give you an ounce of perfume
that I borrowed from honeysuckle vine.
This scent is old, more lovely, one presumes
than French perfume always made by design.

This scent leads me back to my childhood days,
I hear ringing echoes of our voices,
running barefoot over hidden pathways--
days before we had to make life's choices.

Carefree days of locust blooms, apple pies;
forever friends, we innocently thought.
Never worried past our wondering eyes--
pretending life, chasing dreams sometimes caught.

Come, we'll sit on my childhood backdoor stairs,
search for dreams always in plentiful bloom.
We'll stay only to hear memories' airs.
The ticket's in honeysuckle perfume.

Bring Me Home Contest
Sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose
4th place
(Poem updated 1/18/2022)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Sangster - K Avatar
October 8, 2021 at 7:33 PM
Hi Ann, I smiled as I read each line. What lovely childhood memories and all wrapped up in your beautiful poem. Another fav for me :-) Cheers my friend
Peck Avatar
October 9, 2021 at 3:05 PM
Thank you again, Anne! This was a fun contest. I love to write about the old days--they were so much kinder. Take good care :)
Agustin Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 8:17 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me nostalgic of my childhood days. God bless you.
Peck Avatar
October 7, 2021 at 3:08 PM
Thank you, Beata! I'm nostalgic of my childhood, too. Maybe because life was easier.
Rose  Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 6:05 PM
The scent of childhood over our wrists, ah, now that is perfume, dear girl, congrats on your win, Thanks for joining me in this venture.
Peck Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 8:32 AM
Thank you so much, Mystic Rose! Your contest was a joy to write for!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write. Have a blessed day............
Peck Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 10:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paula! I'm honored to be No. 4!
Pandit Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 5:58 AM
Enjoyed the loving tenor of your beautiful write, Ann. Memories speak eloquently.
Peck Avatar
October 1, 2021 at 7:57 AM
Thank you, Vijay! I seem to dwell amid memories often these days.
Clear Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 11:16 AM
Ahhhh........feels like I'm sitting there on your stairs......great emotions .......you are my favorite.........wish I had known youmthen Thx dear heart, suzanne
Peck Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 3:58 PM
I miss honeysuckle, its seductive scent. It always reminds me of childhood. Yes, wish we could have played dolls together or ridden bikes all over town. Thanks for commenting.
Hankins Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 9:30 AM
Beautifully-written, Ann. I will expect to see your name on the winner's list.
Peck Avatar
September 30, 2021 at 10:07 AM
Thank you, Milton. Your kind words are appreciated!
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