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Brightness Catches My Eye

Tall, gray, trees stand together like statues Across the winter’s landscape of hills Some snow still clings to the arms of branches Reaching wide, reaching far and wide! Today, there is no wind in this still life view Of land, rocks, and trees to dark blue mountains A strip of pale light is shining across the horizon Distant treetops seem to be touching it beneath the gray Yet, the white of the snow, is brighter than anything! Anything, from this hill to the far mountains Anything from the frozen ground to the open sky And brighter than everything that catches my eye! Bright enough to spark ideas Bright enough to awaken dreams Brighter than all the gray deterrents Brighter than everything that catches my eye! Heidi Sands 1/19/22 POTD 1/21/22

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Date: 1/23/2022 6:47:00 AM
My belated congrats on your POTD.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2022 6:58:00 AM
Thank you very much Victor. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 1/22/2022 9:01:00 PM
Wonderful piece Heidi, worthy of praise...
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Date: 1/23/2022 5:26:00 AM
Thank you Michael. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 1/22/2022 12:44:00 AM
Your wording and imagery took me there with you Heidi. Congratulations on having this wonderful poem honored with POTD! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/22/2022 5:59:00 AM
That is nice to hear Connie. Thank you very much. Blessings :)
Date: 1/21/2022 7:55:00 PM
A beautiful brightness that sparks ideas, awakens dream! God is good that way! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 1/22/2022 5:59:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I appreciate your nice comment. I hope you have a great day :)
Date: 1/21/2022 4:32:00 PM
"Bright enough to spark ideas, to awaken dreams" This thought brings a smile and I completely agree. Such a moment, *is* awe inspiring, so beautiful and captivating. Congratulations Heidi, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 4:38:00 PM
Hi Brandy. Thank you for your special comment. I am happy it brought a smile. Blessings my friend. I hope you have a nice evening. Hugs :)
Date: 1/21/2022 4:27:00 PM
Oh Heidi, I just read today's POTD. Congratulations! I think snow is beautiful when it creates a hush on the land. But I really don't like cold. Funny, tho - I loved it as a kid and we had so much more then. Anyhow, your poem is very uplifting!
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Date: 1/21/2022 4:36:00 PM
Thank you so much Ann. I agree. The snow can be so pretty, yet when the temperature is frigid , it is tough. Yes, I remember the fun in childhood too. I am happy you found this uplifting :)
Date: 1/21/2022 3:53:00 PM
Heidi, Congratulations on your POTD! Enjoyed....Blessings ~ Debra
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Debra. Blessings :)
Date: 1/21/2022 3:33:00 PM
I love the beautiful imagery you captured in this verse, Heidi, congrats on POTD. Hugs, John
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Date: 1/21/2022 4:08:00 PM
Thank you John. Hugs :)
Date: 1/21/2022 1:35:00 PM
Heidi, I loved reading your still life vision of a snowy landscape that sparked ideas and awakened dreams. Such lovely writing and well worthy of your POTD honor today. Take care, be well, and stay inspired ~ John
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 1:44:00 PM
Thank you John. I appreciate your support and encouragement. It means a lot to me. I hope you have a nice evening :)
Date: 1/21/2022 12:23:00 PM
Heidi, Congratulations on your POTD! Your imagery creates a perfect painting, I can see it on my wall! Kudos! :) Paulette
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 12:35:00 PM
Thank you Paulette. I like to paint too. I am happy you can see it. I appreciate your kind input. :)
Date: 1/21/2022 12:08:00 PM
Heidi what a gem my dear friend, a brighter than bright poem that catches your eye and mine. Congratulations my dear Heidi a wonderful honor bestowed on you and one well deserved. Hugs and blessingsj Jennifer.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 12:35:00 PM
Thank you very much Jennifer. Hugs and Blessings :)
Date: 1/21/2022 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Heidi. Interesting how some love the snow, it's to cold. I love the green of the forest, the blue of the ocean and rivers, the sounds of nature. It's like a tranquilizer to my body. Lovely write, Heidi. May your new year bring blessings of freedom to do what you want.
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Date: 1/21/2022 11:49:00 AM
I do think the snow is pretty, but it is a lot of work too and I do have a hard time with frigid cold. I enjoy all seasons and so much beauty in them all. I can see why you love all that too. Thank you for your kind comment Eve. I hope you have a great New Year. Blessings :)
Date: 1/21/2022 9:50:00 AM
"The white of the snow, that is brighter than anything...", so well penned with nice imagery Heidi...Congratulations on POTD honor...Hugs...~ Ani
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 9:51:00 AM
Thank you very much Ani. I appreciate your kind, supportive feedback :) hugs
Date: 1/21/2022 9:42:00 AM
Heidi, what an amazing and beautiful winter poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 9:51:00 AM
Thank you for the beautiful comment Constance. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 1/21/2022 9:24:00 AM
Heidi, you have painted a lovely picture with your words! Congrats on POTD! Blessings, Kim M
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I appreciate your kind comment. Blessings :)
Date: 1/21/2022 9:01:00 AM
Lovely images reminding me of my WVa home this time of the year, Heidi. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 9:29:00 AM
Thank you Milton. I am happy to hear that :)
Date: 1/21/2022 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful POTD win. This write "catches my eye." Love It. Have a blessed day/weekend..............
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 7:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula. Blessings :)
Date: 1/21/2022 6:56:00 AM
A sight that makes my day bright -- seeing your lovely poem chosen as POTD. Congrats, Heidi! Best wishes, gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 7:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Gershon. I appreciate your support :)
Date: 1/21/2022 6:46:00 AM
Dropping back with Congrats on POTD
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 7:12:00 AM
Thank you Joseph. I appreciate it :)
Date: 1/21/2022 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations Heidi on your POTD honors! Your poem indeed is bright and filled with wonderful imagery to capture the imagination xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 6:41:00 AM
Thank you Mike. I appreciate your support always. Happy Friday :) xxoo
Date: 1/21/2022 5:14:00 AM
Heidi, you know its a beautiful sight when even the wind stops to admire it. Well done. a wonderful "still life" moment.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 5:18:00 AM
True John. Well said. Thank you for your comment :)
Date: 1/21/2022 4:58:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Heidi. Enjoy your day.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 5:03:00 AM
Thank you so much Vijay. I hope you have a nice day :)
Date: 1/21/2022 4:10:00 AM
you make me desperate for Florida dear poet ;)...have a splendid winter...much love, james
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 5:03:00 AM
Lol. I could also enjoy Florida right now. Thank you James :)
Date: 1/21/2022 2:23:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Heidi :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 5:02:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise. Hugs :)
Date: 1/21/2022 2:11:00 AM
Very beautiful, Heidi. Stunning imagery...Congratulations on POTD! Hugs Charlie
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2022 5:01:00 AM
Thank you Charlie. I appreciate your support. Hugs :)
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