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Bright Angel Trail

My knee was a cracked hinge, each step a bargain struck with pain. The canyon walls pressed in, heat still rising from the stone long after sun left it behind. Halfway to the distant rim, I flopped down on the trailside bench— the slats grabbed hold of my full weight as if they meant to keep me. And then I was above it all— a silver thread, the fragile link between breath and beyond. The air was full of silence. I saw how easy it would be to just…let go. But I didn’t. I woke like a question and kept climbing. That’s when I saw him— a black shape on a branch, watching me with one white wing like a secret not yet spoken. He followed at a distance, hopping from shadow to shadow, his pale-marked wing flashing like a faint lantern just ahead of my pain. Every time I faltered, he circled back— a silent reminder that upward was still possible. Step by breaking step, he kept the vigil— lifting off when I stumbled, landing just far enough ahead to pull my spirit after him. No moon marked the trail, but the leaves wore a ghost-edge of nearly invisible light, and his white-barred wing gleamed like a promise I hadn’t yet earned. At last, the rim broke open— a dark horizon against impossibly myriad stars, edged in silver breath. And the raven, faithful as my own shadow, rose into the thinning night and did not return.

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Date: 5/17/2025 6:29:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/16/2025 6:15:00 AM
This is absolutely outstanding. Belated welcome to PS Roxanne! Best way to get noticed is to get involved. Read and comment on others' poetry, submit for contests, heck even write an interesting blog. See ya round
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/16/2025 6:18:00 AM
Interestingly, I used a raven as a metaphorical prophet and source of enlightenment in my poem - Time Traveler, a message for mankind. A raven also features in my poem - Poe's untimely demise

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