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bright sunny day church bells chiming ~ june wedding AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on August 10, 2018

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/11/2018 3:10:00 PM

Blissful is exactly right. June was THE month, and it was weird if you wanted another one.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/11/2018 5:43:00 PM

More romantic that the December 31st wedding for income tax purposes. LOL

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/11/2018 12:52:00 PM

Once upon my parent's time, June was THE month. I need to look up Haikus (again!) because I didn't register a 5/4/3 syllable count which should be a rewarding challenge, eh? This is lovely, as lovely as June and smiling brides. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/11/2018 5:45:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit, CayCay. Modern haiku and senryu actually encourage to have less syllables, the 5-7-5 being the max.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/11/2018 9:58:00 AM

I LOVE this, Line! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/11/2018 10:12:00 AM

Thank you, Janice. Most appreciated.