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Brief Foreign Affaire

BRIEF FOREIGN AFFAIRE Our last date - a garden meal. Dark hair, moustache, flashing Turkish teeth: His warmth of welcome made me feel Sad to leave him there far beneath. Now, hurtling home, it seems unreal - We two amid that bridal wreath. As I soar the Atlantic, The photos stuck with tears, My heart is near frantic, Washing away all earlier fears At meetings so darkly romantic. The Michigan lakeshore appears At last, geometric Chicago - The foggy layer clears, Memories seem long ago. Distant prairie rushes Towards the wings. My cheek blushes And heart sings. Wheelscreech sound, Dreams aground. Home.

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Date: 10/26/2014 8:51:00 PM
This Is A Wonderful Piece- Well Written And Indeed Deep- Beautiful.
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Date: 10/25/2014 7:23:00 PM
I applaud this excellent piece and congratulate you for your wonderful well-deserved win! Congratulations Sidney! Pandita
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Date: 10/25/2014 4:41:00 PM
What a wonderful poem Sidney. I could feel the excitement in returning. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/25/2014 8:05:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Sidney!
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Date: 10/25/2014 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/25/2014 5:54:00 AM
Nice story well penned, congrats on the win, Sidney
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Date: 10/25/2014 4:30:00 AM
I love the story you have told - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Sidney Beck
Date: 10/25/2014 4:32:00 AM
many thanks ....I am glad you enjoyed my poem...bestwishes Syd
Date: 10/25/2014 1:05:00 AM
Hmmm, you wrote from a female's point of view. I was sure this was a woman writing of a real love affair. haha. sure good to see that you entered my contest, Sidney. Long time, no see!! I like best how this one ended with the dreams aground in Chicago! Congrats in my contest.
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Sidney Beck
Date: 10/25/2014 4:36:00 AM
Andrea....many thanks for all your contests ....all of which I like and most of which I enter hahaha it is a fine compliment that you were "sure it was a woman writing" I am always a bit unsure of stepping outside my male persona.....hahaha best wishes and thanks again
Date: 10/19/2014 3:27:00 PM
i had my own "brief foreign affaire" many years ago and you've described exactly how it felt leaving someone behind. excellent poem!
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