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Bridges

out of fragile mists
framework emerges slowly
bridge from me to you

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Faye Gibson

Date: 9/28/2014 8:32:00 PM

Love the picture this creates in my mind. Congrats.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/28/2014 7:53:00 PM

So beautiful in just a few words, I love bridges. Congratulations on your win

David Mohn

Date: 9/28/2014 12:47:00 AM

Lovely Barbara… I’m picturing the Golden Gate piercing the mist and a Sausalito / San Francisco romance…I know, a bit of poetic license taken :)

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/28/2014 8:34:00 PM

Your right! That was my inspiration..I live about 45 min north of the Golden Gate and I always love to see it in the mist. Barbara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/28/2014 12:24:00 AM

Brilliant haiku Barbara! Congrats on huge win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2014 10:04:00 PM

Very nice message in this one, Barbara. Congrats again.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2014 5:40:00 PM

a beautiful haiku. Congratulations on another win.

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/27/2014 6:08:00 PM

Thank you dear..not so many wins..lol. I am so pleased.

Edward Ebbs

Date: 9/27/2014 5:39:00 PM

Congrats...I like this good job! :)

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/27/2014 6:09:00 PM

thank you Ed, it was a surprise! BTW, I like you name...

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/27/2014 5:30:00 PM

I really liked this one; the image of the metal framework of the bridge through the mist, and that heartening last line - congrats on your win in my contest :)

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/27/2014 6:09:00 PM

It is an honor to place in your contest and thank you so much. Barbara

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2014 5:02:00 PM

Wonderful imagery Barbara. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/27/2014 6:11:00 PM

Thank you, I just got home from a short trip and it was fun to see my placement. Barbara

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/26/2014 9:24:00 AM

having had a similar experience, i take in your Haiku personally,,,but even without. this is wondrous poetry.....

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/27/2014 6:10:00 PM

Your opinion means a lot to me Harry. Thank you. Barbara

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 9/24/2014 8:05:00 AM

My Dearest Most Only BeLOVEd,Barbara, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I must agree with Dr. Ram "Stunning" I have missed reading YOUR Magnificent Quill. I Love the last Line I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOURS Eternally...Harry - Soup Mail Call