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Bridges

out of fragile mists framework emerges slowly bridge from me to you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/28/2014 8:32:00 PM
Love the picture this creates in my mind. Congrats.
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Date: 9/28/2014 7:53:00 PM
So beautiful in just a few words, I love bridges. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/28/2014 12:47:00 AM
Lovely Barbara… I’m picturing the Golden Gate piercing the mist and a Sausalito / San Francisco romance…I know, a bit of poetic license taken :)
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/28/2014 8:34:00 PM
Your right! That was my inspiration..I live about 45 min north of the Golden Gate and I always love to see it in the mist. Barbara
Date: 9/28/2014 12:24:00 AM
Brilliant haiku Barbara! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 9/27/2014 10:04:00 PM
Very nice message in this one, Barbara. Congrats again.
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:40:00 PM
a beautiful haiku. Congratulations on another win.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/27/2014 6:08:00 PM
Thank you dear..not so many wins..lol. I am so pleased.
Date: 9/27/2014 5:39:00 PM
Congrats...I like this good job! :)
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/27/2014 6:09:00 PM
thank you Ed, it was a surprise! BTW, I like you name...
Date: 9/27/2014 5:30:00 PM
I really liked this one; the image of the metal framework of the bridge through the mist, and that heartening last line - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/27/2014 6:09:00 PM
It is an honor to place in your contest and thank you so much. Barbara
Date: 9/27/2014 5:02:00 PM
Wonderful imagery Barbara. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/27/2014 6:11:00 PM
Thank you, I just got home from a short trip and it was fun to see my placement. Barbara
Date: 9/26/2014 9:24:00 AM
having had a similar experience, i take in your Haiku personally,,,but even without. this is wondrous poetry.....
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/27/2014 6:10:00 PM
Your opinion means a lot to me Harry. Thank you. Barbara
Date: 9/24/2014 8:05:00 AM
My Dearest Most Only BeLOVEd,Barbara, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I must agree with Dr. Ram "Stunning" I have missed reading YOUR Magnificent Quill. I Love the last Line I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOURS Eternally...Harry - Soup Mail Call
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Date: 9/23/2014 4:18:00 PM
Love the imagery....but also love the haiku in its totality. Well done, Barbara! // paul
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/23/2014 4:21:00 PM
Its always a treat to hear from you..glad you liked it..
Date: 9/20/2014 8:20:00 AM
Stunning haiku, Barb
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/20/2014 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Dr Ram, I value your opinion.
Date: 9/20/2014 7:22:00 AM
You are a rare talent Barbara. This haiku testifies this. Splendid imagery. Wish you good luck.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/20/2014 8:28:00 AM
I cant thank you enough for your comment. Im afraid Im pretty mediocre but will keep on trying..
Date: 9/19/2014 9:06:00 PM
so glad i read this today! beautiful imagery!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/20/2014 8:24:00 AM
thank you dear..glad you stopped y to read...
Date: 9/19/2014 8:53:00 PM
This is the best haiku I ever read
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/19/2014 9:00:00 PM
Oh My, what a lovely thing to say. I am so grateful for the fact that you even read it...BG