Bridge Over Troubled Waters

I love you more today than yesterday
within these weathered walls on sallow earth,
and when I pick the last of spring’s bouquet,
I’ll hope for your return and love’s rebirth.

These rooms seem dark; your garden’s overgrown.
The weeds now blanket our once trodden path
down to our sparkling lake where I alone
can see the murky undercurrent"s wrath.

Sunk in my chair, I stretch to glimpse beyond
the dingy window pane and gnarly tree,
down to the shore of memories thought fond.  
Our bridge, now washed away, I long to see.

If you come home again, a bridge above
your troubles, I will be with all my love.

5/13/20

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 5/23/2020 9:46:00 PM
What a wonderful write - I enjoyed this thoroughly, Rhonda - word use, phrasing, imagery, and a delightful rhythm ... superb! Keep up the great work - blessings! :o) <3
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/24/2020 12:03:00 AM
Thank your kindness and support :)
Date: 5/22/2020 3:19:00 PM
A well-penned piece Rhonda with nice rhyme and good imagery bringing to mind the memory of the great classic song of same name. Blessings, Gordon
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/24/2020 12:02:00 AM
Thank you for all of your recent visits, Gordon...you are very kind! xx Rhonda
Date: 5/21/2020 3:03:00 PM
A Brilliantly crafted Sonnet Rhonda! Congratulations on your win! xxoo
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/21/2020 11:05:00 PM
Thank you, Connie, so much for these kind words and all your visits!
Date: 5/21/2020 12:29:00 AM
A soothing sonnet like a breath of fresh air. Congratulations on your win Rhonda :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/21/2020 11:04:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Aditi!
Date: 5/20/2020 4:18:00 PM
A beautifully penned sonnet of lost love, Rhonda, congrats on your win. Hugs, John
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/21/2020 10:59:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 5/20/2020 4:03:00 PM
This is an excellent write Rhonda enjoyed very much, congrats on your 3rd place!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/21/2020 10:58:00 PM
Thank you, John! It's a beautiful and very inspiring song...xx Rhonda
Date: 5/14/2020 2:14:00 PM
This sonnet flows so well..I can feel the pain of loss in your poem...So brilliantly expressed in your sonnet
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/14/2020 7:30:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One!
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