Bric-A-Brac

Once within these very walls farmers woke at dawn.
The field was full of vegetable, the cows were in the barn.
Life was full of chicken clucks, and Mother's who could darn,
bales of hay stacked within but, all of that's withdrawn.

Within my walls, my embrace, I hold one matron chaste
a Smokey cat, and bric-a-brac, she's a lonely one.
Surrounded left, surrounded right, all her chores are done,
I can but hold, I can not mold, the ones that I embrace.

Four walls within, four walls without, a box of reverie 
meant to hold the dreams of tykes, of pets and chick-a-dees.
Head held high, I seal the deal by denizens decree 
and in the night, the shadows talk to comfort such as she.

A house, a home, a room, a box what stories people tell
but walls will not for you see,  these walls are ancestral.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 4:51 AM
I so enjoyed your poem Deb. I expecially identify with your first stanza. Family should write down things that happen to pass on to future generations. I was given a letter my great grandmother wrote and it meant so much to me to see what she wrote to my grandmother whom I never got to meet. You wrote a wonderful, moving poem Deb. Congratulations on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 3:07 PM
If for the contest, reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Brown Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations on your win Debbie. Love, Carol
Ramage Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 5:48 AM
Lovely poem, oh and when your family is gone its so hard. really like this poem. It just touches me. thank you for sharing it. Lee
Macfarlane Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 11:21 AM
Wonderful write and win! Congrats! Hugs
Johnson Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 10:02 AM
I would have placed this on in the # 1 list. I like the line, "I can but hold, I cannot mold the ones that I embrace. Very impressive. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 8:21 AM
CONGRATS DEBBIE ON AN EXTRAORDINARY WRITE AND OUTSTANDING WIN LUV .. ALWAYS ENJOY YOUR THOUGHTS OF EXPRESSION .. BTW .. HAPPY BIRTHDAY HUGS AND SMOOCHIES FROM MY ENTIRE FAMILY .. ENJOY .. AM GOING TO SEE HAND SPECIALIST TOMORROW FOR ANALYSIS AND PROCEDURES TO CORRECT AND ALLEVIATE SWELLING AND PAIN .. RON IS TYPING FOR ME AGAIN ..OH ..
Macmillan Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 5:48 AM
Ah, your contest was judged yesterday. Maybe you were just giving your all there, yes? Hugs!
Macmillan Avatar
September 18, 2012 at 5:46 AM
Debbie, you okay? Nearly a week of no poetry is so no like you! Sick? Heavy work load? Bad news? Please soupie me, k? Dee worried about you :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 9:21 PM
I loved it before and I love it now. congrats, Debs. And I am SO glad you liked my Pine poem. Thanks for the inspiration.
Gasun Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 7:37 PM
My hearty congratulations on your win, my dear Debbie! hugs:) Leonora
Wellington Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 7:03 PM
Congrats Debbie...your poem reminds me of way back when, when mom used to be sitting darning dad's work pants , the chickens out in the yard creating as ruckus. One love. Joy Wells
Pettit Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 4:27 PM
Congratulations on having your entry chosen as a winner in the contest.
Johnson Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 2:12 PM
A lamenting sadness fills my heart. When endings are what's left of what we start. The grave yards know only too well. What's in these walls is what we sell. Soup mail.
Onclaud Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 12:50 PM
steeped in generational impressions, debbie... warm congrats!.) huggs
Poet Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 11:45 AM
Congrats Debi on your win in the contest!Loved it!
Susan Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 11:12 AM
Congratulations on your #4 win in my contest! Great imagery throughout :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 10:36 AM
Congratulations Debbie on your terrific write and win, well done xx
A   Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 10:28 AM
DEBBIE, congratulations with your wonderful win in Susan's "If These Walls Could Talk..." contest.. have a nice day~ PD
Ellison Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 3:44 PM
You create such a peaceful nostalgic scene with your descriptive words Debbie! Absolutely delightful! Love and hugs, Jack
Poet Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 2:27 AM
Very nice!Enjoyed.Can we call it a sonnet?
Guzzi Avatar
September 14, 2012 at 6:09 AM
yes Kash it's a SONNET using personification as the main poetic vehicle..Susan asked for rhyming poems using personification. Personification can be used in ANY poetic form
Dietrich Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 10:15 PM
This seems to be for the walls challenge of Susan's, right? A very interesting approach and I much enjoyed the nostalgia of it, Debs. So are you saying the fireflies are starting to disappear from your area?? Say it ain't so!!
Austin Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 3:21 PM
Yep! Those walls make a box. Sometimes I feel it too, can't stand high enough to look out the window. Love, daver
Horsman Avatar
September 13, 2012 at 5:22 AM
I find this very profound also Debbie, i also see walls of a different kind surrounding you, that's how i relate to your last stanza.......
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 6:36 AM
Very Clever, like it xx
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