Brendan Ain'T Able

Brendan ain’t ‘Able’

The teacher preached that we are all ‘different but similar and 
                                     love should prevail’ as the ruler came down in seven lashes
on the bare bottom in mathematical precision and so the pattern
                             was formed in bright red strikes and strides for creativity shelled

Two canes plus three canes had equalled one cane for Brendan lost in 
                            the world of artistry fantasy mild mellowed dreams anticipation of 
cruelty abandoned for a more equal world of compassion and kindness
                        Diversity does not mean we all have to die by the hand of the sword

But the ground rules were laid the nucleus centred the core enshrined
                        on the altar of learning of fear and conditioning the human condition
Surely Cain had been forgiven while Brendan was not just so able
                    What a premise to believe all need to be governed by rules and by fear

Brendan himself became governor received medals and glory on the
                          killing fields of purple hearts while his rainbow receded smouldered
in ashes and blood scripted the fiction that wars must be waged on
                            others infidels and the weak and the meek who simply don’t learn

Anarchy has been misunderstood for the chaos projected bedevilled 
                         by the teachers and soldiers whose bayonet is the ruler the wooden
spoon for the worst form of governance inflicted by the concept that
                 we as the people and People could never know best are derided as sheep

Who says it is utopia that we cannot govern ourselves one step at the time
                     inch by inch like the face on the weapon that had patterned his cheeks
‘Rule thyself not thy neighbour’ let us stand up and rebel oppose the
                      dominion of dominant forces overthrow the rule and the ruler and live

10th March 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/11/2017 8:31:00 AM
Hello Kai. Such humanity within your words and message. Please allow me let them stand. Yes, may we all govern our own life and leave others to be. Well done throughout.
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