Breeze

the softly whispered
sweet nothings of ardent love~
in Nature’s keen ear

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Sponsor- Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick

January 17, 2025 at 2:24 AM

Back with congratulations on your winner of long ago. Way to go. Sara K

Len Gasun

February 5, 2023 at 4:10 AM

A wonderful haiku my dear friend. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. hugs

Gary Radice

January 25, 2023 at 2:40 AM

This reads beautifully Valsa. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Cheers - Gary

Sara Kendrick

December 16, 2022 at 3:32 AM

Descriptive and expressive Haiku. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Yesterday here I don't think nature would have enjoyed the breeze at all. Sara

Susan Ashley

December 21, 2021 at 6:54 PM

Dear Valsa, the splendor of your haiku is like a zephyr’s kiss upon the soul.. just so tender and beautiful. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Valsa George

December 22, 2021 at 1:42 AM

'A zephyr's kiss upon the soul'..... Oh I liked it much ! Thanks a lot Susan !

Rico Leffanta

December 21, 2021 at 10:49 AM

Even the Mormon Tabernacle Choir can not sing as beautifully as a breeze flowing through the pine trees . . . . . Enjoyed!

Valsa George

December 22, 2021 at 1:38 AM

You are absolutely right Rico ! Love this comment !

Connie Marcum Wong

December 21, 2021 at 10:31 AM

A lovely haiku Valsa. Blessings xxoo

Valsa George

December 22, 2021 at 1:40 AM

Thanks a lot dear Connie ~~

Sotto Poet

December 21, 2021 at 6:41 AM

Valsa. Your sentences have the comforting quality of a gently whispered wind about them. The sound of soothing words is a delight to witness!

Valsa George

December 21, 2021 at 7:27 AM

I feel so delighted by your sweet comment Lasaad ! Your ability to appreciate people is so commendable ..... :)

Vijay Pandit

December 21, 2021 at 4:19 AM

Your words convey comfort of softly whispered breeze. It is a joy to hear sweet nothings!

Valsa George

December 21, 2021 at 7:25 AM

So grateful Vijay for your words conveying your genuine feelings of appreciation

Supraja Kannan

December 21, 2021 at 3:29 AM

How sweet!!! Beautifully written...

Valsa George

December 21, 2021 at 7:23 AM

Thanks a lot Supraja.... ! So glad about your visit to my page .

Victor Buhagiar

December 21, 2021 at 1:58 AM

It is like heaven on earth. Greetings.

Valsa George

December 21, 2021 at 3:23 AM

On a humid day, a gentle breeze whispering in our ears is as delightful as love being conveyed in whispers. Thanks a lot Victor !

Evelyn Judy Buehler

December 20, 2021 at 10:22 PM

Natural bliss!

Valsa George

December 21, 2021 at 12:35 AM

Indeed breeze is nature's natural bliss. Thank you friend !

Anselmo Boles

December 20, 2021 at 9:32 PM

Nothing gets past Truth's presence. Warm lines Valsa...ab

Valsa George

December 21, 2021 at 12:34 AM

Thanks a lot Anselmo .... ! Glad you have visited my page~

Tom Cunningham

December 20, 2021 at 7:01 PM

Quite a romantic haiku Valsa. Tom

Valsa George

December 21, 2021 at 12:33 AM

Much gratitude Tom ! Have a great day ~

Debra L Brown

December 20, 2021 at 6:50 PM

Beautiful words...

Valsa George

December 21, 2021 at 12:32 AM

Thank you Debra !

Breeze

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