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Breeze

the softly whispered sweet nothings of ardent love~ in Nature’s keen ear
Your Selection Poetry Contest Sponsor- Brian Strand

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Date: 1/17/2025 2:24:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your winner of long ago. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 2/5/2023 4:10:00 AM
A wonderful haiku my dear friend. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. hugs
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Date: 1/25/2023 2:40:00 AM
This reads beautifully Valsa. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 12/16/2022 3:32:00 AM
Descriptive and expressive Haiku. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Yesterday here I don't think nature would have enjoyed the breeze at all. Sara
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Date: 12/21/2021 6:54:00 PM
Dear Valsa, the splendor of your haiku is like a zephyr’s kiss upon the soul.. just so tender and beautiful. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/22/2021 1:42:00 AM
'A zephyr's kiss upon the soul'..... Oh I liked it much ! Thanks a lot Susan !
Date: 12/21/2021 10:49:00 AM
Even the Mormon Tabernacle Choir can not sing as beautifully as a breeze flowing through the pine trees . . . . . Enjoyed!
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Date: 12/22/2021 1:38:00 AM
You are absolutely right Rico ! Love this comment !
Date: 12/21/2021 10:31:00 AM
A lovely haiku Valsa. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 12/22/2021 1:40:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Connie ~~
Date: 12/21/2021 6:41:00 AM
Valsa. Your sentences have the comforting quality of a gently whispered wind about them. The sound of soothing words is a delight to witness!
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Date: 12/21/2021 7:27:00 AM
I feel so delighted by your sweet comment Lasaad ! Your ability to appreciate people is so commendable ..... :)
Date: 12/21/2021 4:19:00 AM
Your words convey comfort of softly whispered breeze. It is a joy to hear sweet nothings!
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Date: 12/21/2021 7:25:00 AM
So grateful Vijay for your words conveying your genuine feelings of appreciation
Date: 12/21/2021 3:29:00 AM
How sweet!!! Beautifully written...
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Date: 12/21/2021 7:23:00 AM
Thanks a lot Supraja.... ! So glad about your visit to my page .
Date: 12/21/2021 1:58:00 AM
It is like heaven on earth. Greetings.
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Date: 12/21/2021 3:23:00 AM
On a humid day, a gentle breeze whispering in our ears is as delightful as love being conveyed in whispers. Thanks a lot Victor !
Date: 12/20/2021 10:22:00 PM
Natural bliss!
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Date: 12/21/2021 12:35:00 AM
Indeed breeze is nature's natural bliss. Thank you friend !
Date: 12/20/2021 9:32:00 PM
Nothing gets past Truth's presence. Warm lines Valsa...ab
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Date: 12/21/2021 12:34:00 AM
Thanks a lot Anselmo .... ! Glad you have visited my page~
Date: 12/20/2021 7:01:00 PM
Quite a romantic haiku Valsa. Tom
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Date: 12/21/2021 12:33:00 AM
Much gratitude Tom ! Have a great day ~
Date: 12/20/2021 6:50:00 PM
Beautiful words...
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Date: 12/21/2021 12:32:00 AM
Thank you Debra !

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