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Breathtaking

A ghostly vision; flickering in and out of my sight a moth’s white wings flap like a series of still photos, flipped ever so swiftly before my eyes. The air ripples like a pool of liquid ebony as each stroke of its wings opens dimensions of time and space. Appearing and disappearing like a flash of white in the moonlight, a monochrome reality comes into focus for a split second. And like stop-and-go animation, the moth’s motions seem surreal! Its flight instills a hypnotic trance, like a flittering candle fluttering in the wind. Black and white images unite in a synergy of negative contrasts, culminating in a collage of silhouettes that is positively breathtaking! (Free Verse) 2/21/2017

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Date: 5/4/2023 2:37:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, with this beautiful writing Emile :) - hugs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/4/2023 9:35:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise, as always, your comments are most welcomed and appreciated, my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/25/2018 9:23:00 PM
A lovely poem, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2018 8:34:00 AM
Thank you so much Line, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/27/2017 10:07:00 AM
I am just now reading through your poetry. I love your writing. This is certainly a breathtaking poem :)
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Date: 2/27/2017 10:09:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi, your support and encouragement are appreciated, Emile.
Date: 2/26/2017 6:15:00 PM
Love your take on black and white Emile. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Great writing! Elaine
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/27/2017 7:06:00 AM
Thanks Elaine, I truly appreciate your support, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2017 12:22:00 PM
An excellent poem of monochromic beauty, Emile. A poem worthy of such an apt title! Regards // paul
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/24/2017 2:19:00 PM
Thanks Paul, your comments are most welcome and appreciated, Emile.
Date: 2/23/2017 8:48:00 AM
Yes Emile....my mind accelerated, flashing your magical images before me! I am a big fan of Butterflies & Moths in my community garden! Great poem!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/23/2017 7:29:00 PM
Thanks James, I'm pleased that you found my poem enjoyable and took the time to tell me about it. I appreciate it, Emile.
Date: 2/22/2017 1:15:00 PM
"the air ripples" really brings this piece alive! Congratulations on your win Emile! :-)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/22/2017 4:20:00 PM
Thanks Mark, I truly appreciate your encouraging comments, Emile.
Date: 2/22/2017 12:40:00 PM
What a beautiful write Emile, with vivid descriptions, congrats on a nice win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/22/2017 12:58:00 PM
Thanks so much John, your friendly comment and help with the typo made my day my friend, Emile.

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