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Breathtaking

B eyond the echoes of my last word R each the subtleties of instability. E quity and chaos battling for space; A ttracted only to each other.... T ranquility dominates and peace is found. H eaven is as close as the sweet smell of home. T ransient for a moment, so I know: A Judgment Day is befalling, K neeling in humility I confess..... I am condemned and then forgiven. N estled now in the bosom of my mother, G lory comes to those who Believe! ~May my mother RIP knowing we will meet again~

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Date: 4/18/2016 7:20:00 PM
A wonderful acrostic.
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Date: 3/15/2016 6:02:00 PM
Lukas, Congratulations on your "Breathtaking win." LINDA
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Date: 3/14/2016 10:27:00 AM
Lukas very nice entry, congrats on your placement in my contest. John
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 3/16/2016 1:25:00 PM
Thank you so much John! I had fun writing it. I am just jumping into the formal demands of diverse poetry writing and find it much more challenging and interesting at the same time. Thanks for offering an opportunity for me to learn more about it!!
Date: 3/11/2016 9:01:00 AM
Belief is tht gives u peace,,happiness....superb....gl
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Date: 3/8/2016 11:38:00 PM
Wonderful write...Linda
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