Breathtaking

B eyond the echoes of my last word
R each the subtleties of instability.
E quity and chaos battling for space;
A ttracted only to each other.... 
T ranquility dominates and peace is found.
H eaven is as close as the sweet smell of home.
T ransient for a moment, so I know:
A Judgment Day is befalling,
K neeling in humility I confess.....
I am condemned and then forgiven. 
N estled now in the bosom of my mother,
G lory comes to those who Believe!

~May my mother RIP knowing we will meet again~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gazbowski Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 7:20 PM
A wonderful acrostic.
A   Avatar
March 15, 2016 at 6:02 PM
Lukas, Congratulations on your "Breathtaking win." LINDA
Hamilton Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Lukas very nice entry, congrats on your placement in my contest. John
Ficklin Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Thank you so much John! I had fun writing it. I am just jumping into the formal demands of diverse poetry writing and find it much more challenging and interesting at the same time. Thanks for offering an opportunity for me to learn more about it!!
Bhurani Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Belief is tht gives u peace,,happiness....superb....gl
A   Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 11:38 PM
Wonderful write...Linda
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