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breathless, my journey ends

Dried-up, ___a stream___ in the moor, no-man’s land. When a soul dares near— a gunshot blooms / Red / the barren soil will feast on anything. You said amid this desert stands —an oasis— A land of innocence, but where you crown sins. (Greedy, yes, but that’s all humanity ever is.) I begged you to point me to the shrine yet I am left stumbling, ...blind... Before what was left of the roads once promised direction— I drop to my knees, cracked soil tears my skin. In no-man’s land— there are no breaths ahead.

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Date: 6/6/2025 5:20:00 AM
Hearty Congratulations on your win dear Jasmin.
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Jasmine Tsai
Date: 6/6/2025 6:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Valsa <3
Date: 5/27/2025 4:30:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win i the contest, Jasmine :) - hugs
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Jasmine Tsai
Date: 5/27/2025 8:18:00 AM
Oh my god thank you so much! Hugs well received <3
Date: 5/26/2025 12:33:00 PM
Quite a scenario you word paint here Jasmine. Hey, belated welcome to PS!
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Jasmine Tsai
Date: 5/26/2025 7:21:00 PM
Thank you for your encouragement! This is actually a rewrite on some of my earlier work (before I find PS). I still have much to learn :) Everyone here writes amazing work.

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