Joanna Daniel Poet Blitz

Breathless Beyond Senses

"Breathless, we flung us on a windy hill, Laughed in the sun, and kissed the lovely grass."       
                                 - Rupert Brooke

Feel the difference
Feel you're breathless
   Breathless enjoying beauty
   Breathless emanating light
       Light that's radiant
       Light that's colourful
           Colourful flowers
           Colourful rainbow
                Rainbow gives hope
                Rainbow gives joy
Joy of heaven
Joy of faith
    Faith in the Creator
    Faith in His goodness
        Goodness of Nature
        Goodness of love
             Love His creation
             Love spreads ripples
                   Ripples all around
                   Ripples of happiness
Happiness of life
Happiness of mind
     Mind thinks positively
     Mind works wonders
         Wonders and miracles
         Wonders of confidence
               Confidence in others
               Confidence in yourself
                    Yourself can achieve
                    Yourself can dream
Dream of dance
Dream of ever after
     Ever after is coming soon
     Ever after with the Lord
         Lord of mountains
         Lord of the seas
               Seas wave calmness
               Seas wave peace
                     Peace amid turbulence
                     Peace and prosperity
Prosperity with blessedness
Prosperity of the soul
     Soul sighs serenity
     Soul-stirring music
         Music of birds
         Music uplifts senses
              Senses find rejuvenation
              Senses are exuberant
                       Exuberant...
                            Rejuvenation...


12.28.2021



For Constance La France's ""B" Forms, 10 plus lines" contest

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Constance La France January 20, 2022 at 11:04 AM Jo, congratulations on your Second Place win in my B Forms contest with your wonderful poem and I love the quote ~Constance

Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2022 at 8:41 AM Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a creative write. I love this. Have a blessed ..................

Christuraj Alex January 10, 2022 at 8:23 PM Great poem in blitz form. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler January 9, 2022 at 6:51 AM Wow Jo. This left me breathless just reading it - it's great! And the form is perfect for your words. Linda

Sara Kendrick January 7, 2022 at 3:03 AM I like the way you went down the alphabet. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Charles Messina January 6, 2022 at 3:35 AM Wow, this is superb, Jo. Never heard of this form. Amazing write! Best wishes in the contest. Happy New Year! Hugs, Charlie

Reason A. Poteet January 5, 2022 at 8:44 PM Love the graphic presentation. Much easier to read and the look is beautifully done. I like the message too and the ending two lines are a great summary. Well-done. Reason A. Poteet January 11, 2022 at 12:59 PM PS: back for a congratulation on your win. It is an inspired peice from your poetic pen, Jo. Have you done a blitz before? Well-done.

Eve Roper December 30, 2021 at 8:12 AM Great inspirational verse, Jo. Good luck in the contest. Happy New Years with best wishes and resolutions

Tom Cunningham December 28, 2021 at 9:10 AM Very creative and uplifting Jo, Best of luck in the contest and hope you have a happy and healthy New year. Tom

Victor Buhagiar December 28, 2021 at 8:50 AM I have never written a blitz. Looks very special. It is a lovely poem I was hooked from top to bottom. Best for a win.