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Breathless Beyond Senses

"Breathless, we flung us on a windy hill, Laughed in the sun, and kissed the lovely grass." - Rupert Brooke Feel the difference Feel you're breathless Breathless enjoying beauty Breathless emanating light Light that's radiant Light that's colourful Colourful flowers Colourful rainbow Rainbow gives hope Rainbow gives joy Joy of heaven Joy of faith Faith in the Creator Faith in His goodness Goodness of Nature Goodness of love Love His creation Love spreads ripples Ripples all around Ripples of happiness Happiness of life Happiness of mind Mind thinks positively Mind works wonders Wonders and miracles Wonders of confidence Confidence in others Confidence in yourself Yourself can achieve Yourself can dream Dream of dance Dream of ever after Ever after is coming soon Ever after with the Lord Lord of mountains Lord of the seas Seas wave calmness Seas wave peace Peace amid turbulence Peace and prosperity Prosperity with blessedness Prosperity of the soul Soul sighs serenity Soul-stirring music Music of birds Music uplifts senses Senses find rejuvenation Senses are exuberant Exuberant... Rejuvenation... 12.28.2021 For Constance La France's ""B" Forms, 10 plus lines" contest

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Constance La France

Date: 1/20/2022 11:04:00 AM

Jo, congratulations on your Second Place win in my B Forms contest with your wonderful poem and I love the quote ~Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/11/2022 8:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a creative write. I love this. Have a blessed ..................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/10/2022 8:23:00 PM

Great poem in blitz form. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/9/2022 6:51:00 AM

Wow Jo. This left me breathless just reading it - it's great! And the form is perfect for your words. Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2022 3:03:00 AM

I like the way you went down the alphabet. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Charles Messina

Date: 1/6/2022 3:35:00 AM

Wow, this is superb, Jo. Never heard of this form. Amazing write! Best wishes in the contest. Happy New Year! Hugs, Charlie

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 1/5/2022 8:44:00 PM

Love the graphic presentation. Much easier to read and the look is beautifully done. I like the message too and the ending two lines are a great summary. Well-done.

Reason A. Poteet
Date: 1/11/2022 12:59:00 PM

PS: back for a congratulation on your win. It is an inspired peice from your poetic pen, Jo. Have you done a blitz before? Well-done.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/30/2021 8:12:00 AM

Great inspirational verse, Jo. Good luck in the contest. Happy New Years with best wishes and resolutions

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/28/2021 9:10:00 AM

Very creative and uplifting Jo, Best of luck in the contest and hope you have a happy and healthy New year. Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/28/2021 8:50:00 AM

I have never written a blitz. Looks very special. It is a lovely poem I was hooked from top to bottom. Best for a win.