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Breathless

I breathe in And out I wheeze…I pause instead I breathe in And out I wheeze…I can’t Breathe… My lungs are deadened Breathe… My voice box is tattered I breathe in But unable to breathe out And I feel restless Without a doubt I breathe softly And heavily I’m upset…I scream in an instant I breathe violently And heavily I fret…I gasp in dread

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/18/2012 8:05:00 PM
this is very interesting, how you thought about what it would feel like to be breathless. Let me check out one more poem from you tonight!!
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