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Breathe

When the night claims you like a wayward leaf of old 
 and it takes you to the caves where anything turns gold 
 you don't ask any questions and you don't dare breathe 
 you just follow her, like a light weight tumbled weed 

 Down the passages of dark, down the staircase of rune 
 every step a little deeper than the crevices of moon 
 you can almost taste the air, on your tonguing clepe 
 you can down the stars of heaven in one single leap

 Taking you by the waist it shall dance you through
 the elixir of happiness when your feeling down n' blue 
 you just thank the Lord for the magic of this gift 
 all you need is skin n' eyes to cross her lowly rift 

 When night claims you like a wayward leaf of old 
 and takes you to her caves, all etched with gold 
 don't ask her any questions just go ahead breathe 
 no, don't ask her anything at all, just breathe, 

 yes breathe...
 

Written by: Mystic Rose
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 Inhale the mystery of her dark gaze
 As the stars up above are set ablaze
 She'll mesmerize with the melody she plays
 You'll ask her no questions, you'll simply obey

 Her Midas touch will turn the moon to gold
 As her dark gaze turns icy cold
 You'll breathe in her fragrance as she passes by
 You'll ask her no questions, you'll simply comply

 Your heart will melt in her seductive embrace
  Making you forget your fall from grace
 And as she whispers to you, soft and tender
 You'll ask her no questions, you'll simply surrender

 Inhale the mystery of her dark gaze
 As she lights up your heart, and passions blaze
  But when you awaken, to leave, she'll seethe
  You'll ask her no questions,  you'll simply breathe

 Yes, breathe  ..........
 12/30/15


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Date: 3/7/2016 12:09:00 PM
Good win.pd
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Date: 1/3/2016 5:09:00 PM
I finally figured out how this contest was. I sure hope to try it!!
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Date: 12/30/2015 10:11:00 PM
Very beautifully done!!!!enjoyed very much! Best of luck..
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Joseph May
Date: 12/30/2015 10:16:00 PM
Thank you Donna..good to see you!
Date: 12/30/2015 8:16:00 PM
wow, this is awesome!!! Did Mystic write it with you?? I have not read the requirements of the contest yet, but it sounded like a collaboration contest or something. I sure do love this, Joseph!!
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Joseph May
Date: 12/30/2015 8:22:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, It is a collaboration contest...she wrote the first 4 quatrains which is on the contest page..glad you liked it Andrea

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