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Breath of Love

I was thirteen when I found out I was magnetized by your style Those candid smile, I long to see I can't wait the day that you and me Will meant to be I don't know if it is called love and affection All I know I was in stunt in the same motion Like of every girl needs an attention From love spell to sweet combination I hate myself for falling like a statue Days of you love me and you love me not, I count seven two Those days were innocent of melo dramatic tattoo Oh boy, breath of love I knew; I'm breathing for you..

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Date: 2/9/2015 7:34:00 PM
Nicely put, well written with poetic flare. The poem has a message and delivers it well. This reads as a love poem with sexual overtones. Emile.
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Amor Otong
Date: 2/9/2015 8:36:00 PM
Thank you Emile.. hugss, amor
Date: 2/9/2015 3:54:00 AM
lovey tribute for your boyfriend - if it is for the contest I think you need the words 'breath of love' in the body of the poem:-) Hugs jan xx
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Amor Otong
Date: 2/9/2015 8:37:00 PM
I don't have a boyfried. Oh yes, thank you Jan..

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