Amor Otong Poet Rhyme

Breath of Love

I was thirteen when I found out I was magnetized by your style
Those candid smile, I long to see
I can't wait the day that you and me
Will meant to be

I don't know if it is called love and affection
All I know I was in stunt in the same motion
Like of every girl needs an attention
From love spell to sweet combination

I hate myself for falling like a statue
Days of you love me and you love me not, I count seven two
Those days were innocent of melo dramatic tattoo
Oh boy, breath of love I knew; I'm breathing for you..

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Emile Pinet February 9, 2015 at 7:34 PM Nicely put, well written with poetic flare. The poem has a message and delivers it well. This reads as a love poem with sexual overtones. Emile. Amor Otong February 9, 2015 at 8:36 PM Thank you Emile.. hugss, amor

Jan Allison February 9, 2015 at 3:54 AM lovey tribute for your boyfriend - if it is for the contest I think you need the words 'breath of love' in the body of the poem:-) Hugs jan xx Amor Otong February 9, 2015 at 8:37 PM I don't have a boyfried. Oh yes, thank you Jan..