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Breath of Fresh Air

(2/26/12) You are my breath of fresh air you came into my life when I was in despair I felt god had made you just for me Because in my heart you will always be. It seems I searched all my life for someone like you Went all the wrong ways and didn’t know what to do. Then you walked into my life like a breath of fresh air And all my heartaches and pains disappeared. Your smile radiated every room you walked into And all the men s heads turned and looked at you Your voice as gentle as the pitter patter of the rain Soothing and cleansing and relieving all my pain. Like dew drops that cling to everything on the ground This is your love- which in you I found Like the rising and setting of the sun You are my love, my only one. You are the breath of fresh air which I need to survive And our love will live thru the ends of time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/27/2012 7:07:00 PM
Dang, I wish someone could write like this about me! You are gonna razzle dazzle someone special with this one, Louis. A great Valentine's treat. I really was captivated to the very last line! Gwendolen
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Louis Rams
Date: 2/27/2012 7:14:00 PM
tell me something about yourself and i will reply and write something for you on that there is no lie.
Date: 2/27/2012 6:32:00 PM
Hi Louis; This is a very good poem you have here. I really like it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 2/27/2012 7:12:00 PM
thank you lucilla ! i reciprocated and read and commented on two of your poems.

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