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joy unrehearsed bliss our first love soul’s thirst thus quenched 02-December-2022

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 12/2/2022 5:20:00 AM

Truth. The “soul’s thirst thus quenched” BY A COMMUNING WITH GOD. Many hope & pray 4 suCh a relationship with God, but not yet have had it. Their prayers WILL BE answered…don’t lose hope & make sure 1. Greatest desire is to Know him; 2. Love him first, above ALL with whole heart, mind, soul. Then in prayer the communion will happen & your poem become a known, total reality. GREAT pen

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 12/2/2022 6:03:00 AM

Thank you, Sally. You speak words of deep wisdom.