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Breaking Up Is Hard To Do

re-post inspired by Lewis contest theme The day my love was rejected My soul itself,was so dejected All the nights drift into the surreal My life's..a nightmare..so unreal Pain touches my inner core The day she said no more..no more Concentration just flies away Tomorrow is always yesterday.... Questions,questions nag my mind Answers..missing I cannot find The perfect circle ,broke in two This curtain obliterates my view Her eyes said all there was to say Alone,we went our separate way Tomorrow is always yesterday....

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Date: 3/2/2017 7:48:00 PM
this is heartbreaking, Brian. Very well expressed!
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Brian Strand
Date: 3/3/2017 3:11:00 AM
Yes thanks Andrea experience is so important to a poet.

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