Breaking the Surface

He binds my hands and wrists behind me 
struggling to escape I see 
the fury of the coming storm 
arising high beyond the trees

I know too well the chance I take
when I accept a stranger's ride
beneath my knees, cold earth awaits
for this will be the night I die

As the growing black enfolds me
stars are blinking far above
Goodbye, earth and sky and music
Goodbye, everyone I love

Something murmurs very gently
while I spiral further down
voice and spirit leave my body
as in Death's dark pool I drown

Just before my flame's extinguished
what, I wonder, is my purpose?
with that riddle left to answer
I fight hard and break the surface

Breathe again the cool, moist air
feel my own blood fill my mouth
gasping for the breath I lost
as my life almost flickered out

As I look about I find
to my relief, I'm quite alone
with ragged edges of my mind
I long for those who wait at home

Lying still beneath the pale moon,
waiting for the sun to rise
knowing Dawn approaches soon,
I think about the night I died

And though I almost left this world
I'm far too numb to feel the fear
I realize because of me
a fool was almost buried here
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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December 13, 2014 at 4:56 PM
Ok is this my Mom, writing under a pseudonym??? Just kidding, she refused to read this one. She knows what it's about. It is a dramatization, fortunately. This is what can happen when ayoung women hitchhikes.
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