Breaking the Chain of Command

Bulldozers, drunk with gasoline
once again have scarred and maimed
a place, once green with grass and trees
Where we once heard the sound of breeze
and ghosts of children played their games
and were forced to leave their childhood memories

There trembles now an engine's roar,
that drowns the sounds of echoed glee
In trenched out holes, in broken trees
The big top guns....pour the concrete, build the towers
Ravage earth, take the power, then run- run- run

The dinosaurs raise their iron heads
Jaws dripping with loads of earth and grass
Like a gopher rampages through his halls
Forcing the small guys to their knees
One by one the disappearance of the land
And while the green world our grandfathers knew
Is gone in days, with every oak that falls
When this new invading presence someday is done
Has had his fill of dollar bills, 
Then soon abandons one and all..

What will be our fate
Who will mourn, who will recall?
Will we stand up, change the course 
Can we stop invading forces
Before it’s too late? Before we have lost it all?


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/28/2011 6:50:00 PM
Thanks for commenting on my blog today, best of luck in the contest with this wonderful entry~~
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Date: 1/28/2011 6:00:00 PM
Wonderful write!Good questions you have raised----kashinath
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Date: 1/28/2011 3:53:00 PM
So true are your words... speachless I amat you reading of my mind in this well constructed write from the heart... I will catch up on alot of your work I kissed this week with all our Snow here in NY...with love Michael
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